well guys this was a hot battle, it kept me on edge!

here's my critique:



biohazard: you verse was fire in a sense of how it was read, it flowed really nice! but where it lacked was in originality- in your disses i felt that i heard similiar shit before and then in the end it was rushed
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>Samurai_Shampoo: lol your verse was bugged out! some crazy shit - i dig animals but i love cutting trees? "premature princes prematurely dusted"- was ill!
the way you used his name up in there was hot too!~
your lines were funny as hell
>i ain't marry the bitch, guess that makes you a bastard

>it's the.. Street Writer pile-drive upside-down vert-a-broad
>unleash Zangief grief on a nuclear waste cause

the only thing that i can say you could work on with yours is being overly creative with your punches
cuz when you think of too much original shit the reader is like wtf is he talking about and doesnt understand the diss... feel me?

but since that was the only thing my vote is for you: SAMARAI SHAMPOO..

- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
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