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17469, i'll never look into your eyes again... Posted by Morehouse, Sat Oct-15-05 03:28 AM
-the doors
so limited i am in my own insanity. i am a desperate sheperd in between the jazz of midnight and your eyes that have their magic, some beginning i can't quite imagine, given to me without asking. we define romance with broken thumbs that touch each other's hearts the way a guitar's riff splits our ribs in flesh, in blood, in bone. i once heard jimi on the way home and suddenly forgot myself, remembered you in all your found tragedy...the dead in all there purported media. the children are crying for our encore baby...we have to move from skin to kin, mother nature's accessory is all she wanted, to know we cared beyond our daily zombie run. simple sympathy is, to turn away from to call it a damn shame, the way of the world, out of our hands, we had nothing to do with those tears. as gently as the world spins guides our existence to the very tip of some equatorial line untouched, i can only think we are worth more than a memory. we are the dividing line between meaning and meaninglessness. if us does not make it, love will die. and all we'll have is you and i, separate, a song without chorus, a night void of stars, a morning losing constantly the hope of tommorrow. i ponder time in the infinite backlight of your eyes and wonder what forever is made of. ***********************************
myself is sculptor of your body’s idiom: the musician of your wrists; the poet who is afraid only to mistranslate a rhythm in your hair... -E.E. Cummings
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17470, RE: i'll never look into your eyes again... Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Sat Oct-15-05 11:14 AM
i ponder time in the infinite backlight of your eyes and wonder what forever is made of.
I always like to read your poems and then re-read them again. You craft so much into a single thought that splinters off into a million thoughts that can be their own poems as well. And the e.e. cummings piece in your signature is a thing of beauty. ~~~~~~~~ if you like my poems let them walk in the evening,a little behind you
then people will say "Along this road i saw a princess pass on her way to meet her lover(it was toward nightfall)with tall and ignorant servants." e.e. cummings
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17471, woah! ARCHIVE! Posted by Ezzsential, Sat Oct-15-05 12:05 PM
i absolutely adored this peice! the words u used to convey the sentiment were remarkable you know ima fan of your originals, that have only gotten better over the years =) thanks MH!
- I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...
www.webspawner.com/users/delicateaurasoul4/index.html This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net ~>> local Boston band with a spiritual
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17472, 2nd... Posted by hdub, Tue Nov-15-05 10:14 PM
...and ill put that in the clean up thread too- but i think we should let it sit out front for a bit before putting it in there cause imo this seems to have been massively slept on
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