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17447, your blues aint like mine(add on) Posted by 3rd i, Thu Oct-06-05 09:49 PM
slow low hum opressive heat that starts at 7am water moccassians collard greens and hamhocks, hoe cakes and pound cake funerals always have the best food
Your reds aint like mine...........
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17448, RE: givin it a try... Posted by Sophistifunk, Thu Oct-06-05 10:06 PM
water drops on my window and my diary sings the Blues of long forgotten days and re-aquainted love... of many sleepless nights and too long afternoons of 'maybes' and 'what ifs'...
man, your blues aint like mine
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17449, RE: your blues aint like mine(add on) Posted by AidenWaves, Thu Oct-06-05 10:12 PM
lyin in bed wit company early morning warmth makes u stagnant sloth faces meet, open eyes he's cute, but not the one i love
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17450, RE: your blues aint like mine(add on) Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Fri Oct-07-05 09:19 AM
haunted by the unattainable dreams constructed in marble columns rendered into ashen relics upon awakening into reality which, though tangible is no more sustainable than the dream
man... your greys ain't like my greys...
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17451, RE: your blues aint like mine(add on) Posted by marijane, Fri Oct-07-05 11:36 AM
new... born again reliving death to light and fresh to sights un seen cleansing natural colors seeming unclean
man,...shit your green ain't like my green
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17452, shit your greens aint like mine Posted by 3rd i, Sun Oct-09-05 04:03 AM
fresh cut grass green vibrate youth new money smells reaching deep into the newness of birthing creation the color green hums cuz it's happy just to BE paradise is always green
your black aint like my blacks
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17453, your black aint like mine Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Mon Nov-07-05 03:02 PM
as i drag you into the vast empty spaces that begat broken dreams i take a morbid satisfaction at trapping you in a freshly-created nightmare
your rage aint like my rage
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17454, this is somewhat sad, but so true Posted by the perfect mistake, Fri Oct-07-05 05:14 PM
funerals always have the best food
*nods*
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17455, your whites aint like mine Posted by 3rd i, Fri Oct-07-05 09:44 PM
i believe that heaven is soft falling snow serene new tee shirts fresh from the pack socks that can't wait to meet the red clay of georiga
your purples aint like mine......... ______________________________________ www.myspace.com/3rd_i
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17456, heh... archive? Posted by Ezzsential, Sat Oct-08-05 02:30 PM
loved this third.. great idea...this is classic.... everyone's responses were awesome
your thoughts aint like mine...
gathered many shingles of perspectives and form fitted a mosiac collage collecting picture-esque memoirs, movein soft thru the filaments of my pigment plummet prisms into my soul stab my chest and leak out the sun my bones glow with collections rotating the flecks in the optical illusions of eyes
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17457, adding on Posted by shawn, Sun Oct-09-05 08:29 PM
many days, playing the fool schools out, playing with you laying with you, praying you dont move dont leave, stay put, breathing together enjoying the rest of the moment
i want your colors to blend with mine...
shawn aka boocho mcfly part of adult film stars www.sonicbids.com/adultfilmstars
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17458, RE: adding on Posted by 3rd i, Sun Oct-09-05 08:34 PM
waking up to your phone calls golden light all in my eyes giggling at chef mcfly..why oh why the browns of ur eyes on the brown of my skin sinking in......
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17459, look at you! Posted by shawn, Tue Oct-11-05 08:19 AM
you remembered that! well, you're a better cat or should i say kitten, miss, being specific back in the days writtens, lots of telefone trippin rockin myself to sleep thinkin of things i wished but didnt do you get it?
shawn aka boocho mcfly part of adult film stars www.sonicbids.com/adultfilmstars
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17460, waking dream... Posted by Morehouse, Sat Oct-08-05 06:00 PM
i awake to warm air brushing across my liquor-laden lips hoping it's you breathing, leaning in to kiss my morning into being...only it's not you, just a product of me leaving the window open the night before when i pondered jumping out of it.
*********************************** "I loved those poems that seemed so small on the page but that swelled in the mind; I didn’t like the windy, dwindling kind." -Louise Gluck
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17461, RE: your blues aint like mine(add on) Posted by AidenWaves, Sat Oct-08-05 11:27 PM
hearing superfluois rants, raves niggaz half naked in videos talk shows, stage not tryin to elevate just out for da change
damn...your groove ain't like my groove
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17462, RE: your blues aint like mine(add on) Posted by Universadevine, Sun Oct-09-05 10:21 AM
your pain isn't like my pain constantly planting seeds with each letter that proceedeth in vain so they choke her essence his so called lady eyes rain misleading and teasing your pain ain't like my pain tainting her fertalized soil once he made her feel hot like temperture boil she didn't think with her he'd toy but he said it himself "I'm only a boy" future only in dreams your pain ain't like my pain no tomorrow for this lady? heart in sorrow? maybe growing cold to relationships your pain ain't like my pain destiny creating a new fate no faith to wait many days of comtemplate and debate your pain ain't like my pain her doors knock with others his words just surface covers actions replaced new truths if love was sick in him she caught it and now is dying of a terminal illness your pain ain't like my pain
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17463, RE: your blues aint like mine(add on) Posted by marijane, Tue Oct-11-05 08:56 AM
I'm clairvoyant withouth being cocky my crystal ball is made of ice so I tell the cold hard truth I can't remember the days whyn my gypsie got me more than a cheap drink and a hicky but I still rock dreads cause I'm s'posed to be concious
niggas your clear definitely ain't like my clear.
thanx for words.
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17464, RE: your blues aint like mine(add on) Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Wed Oct-12-05 04:21 PM
I realize my dreams have holes eaten in them moths have made homes in my deep abiding faith and left me remarkably a realist where at once my knees hit the floor to cry and pray the dust from my lungs I ached for you that night and you showed up right on time as usual
~~~~~~~~ if you like my poems let them walk in the evening,a little behind you
then people will say "Along this road i saw a princess pass on her way to meet her lover(it was toward nightfall)with tall and ignorant servants." e.e. cummings
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17465, RE: your blues aint like mine(add on) Posted by InGeniousPoet, Wed Oct-12-05 07:18 PM
vexed by my spirits Jack Daniels has stock in my conscience, I move wearily, stumbling into oblivion until dawn beckons...
Your hangovers aint like mine ________________________________________ "With peace and love in my lungs, I hold my breath until the Poet returns."
--Boxcarboys
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17466, bathwater hymns Posted by blaksilence, Thu Oct-13-05 08:58 PM
crashing from lips sex thick as pound cake slow stirred screams moans what? fuck
just a dream she's gone
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17467, Insomnia blues Posted by shanilovemusic, Mon Nov-07-05 01:42 AM
Sleep interrupted your voice between thighs and dark like window's air I am whispering laughter and moaning his name in silence Come to me everyday It is hard to be in love with two men Your dreams ain't like mine
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17468, RE: your blues aint like mine(add on) Posted by Nowachaoticthing, Fri Nov-04-05 06:15 PM
This is one of my fav cyphers... Upping on GP.
"To be a poet is a condition, not a profession." - Robert Frost
My crappy blog: http://www.livejournal.com/users/eyes_of_mine/
Comming soon... "Blind Eye Turning"
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