17410, RE: Writing Exercise---Indulge Yourself Posted by bonitaapplebaum71481, Thu Sep-01-05 09:12 AM
There's a DJ makin replays of fly tracks while we sit back Enjoying the rushing scenery of beautiful greenerys Delighting the eyes as the scent of the pines hits our noses A door closes as newcomers come thru with that one, two This train is a place I come home to Like that McKnight joint on point with his crooning melodies sellin me felonies for being that fly, my mental elevation's so high that my sighs could tickle God's cheeks but here I speak trying to work this flow, trying to be good to go on my end of being a Boxcar Babe, trying to make my rhymes stick so my words can never fade...
<===== ain't she cute as a button??
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