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Topic subjecttough, but I'm going with #1
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17043, tough, but I'm going with #1
Posted by Whateva, Wed Oct-26-05 03:54 PM
Something about it feels right. The word selection and cadence is on point. It's deceptively simple looking, but it's effective. He/she could rework some of the references though IMO.