16992, hmmm Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Oct-20-05 04:52 PM
both were somewhat meh to me
flash's was decent all the way thru with a couple of lines that stood out
but i think sik came a lil bit more complex tho, it still only seemed to work in the middle and part of the end of the verse tho
ima give it to sik for this lil section here:
"flash sayin prayers, its a little bit late// I alliterate, to obliterate- illiterate fakes// ya lil' litter gets ate, I hesitate to relate, //I dont tol-er-ate lack-luster lim-it-ed traits rally the hate, yo, Ima man of action,// cata- strophic reactions- retract ya wack tracks son"
i just like the rhyme scheme on this even tho it seems a tad off on when it switches
Sik gets it
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