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16992, hmmm
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Oct-20-05 04:52 PM
both were somewhat meh to me

flash's was decent all the way thru with a couple of lines that stood out

but i think sik came a lil bit more complex tho, it still only seemed to work in the middle and part of the end of the verse tho

ima give it to sik for this lil section here:

"flash sayin prayers, its a little bit late// I
alliterate, to obliterate- illiterate fakes// ya lil'
litter gets ate, I hesitate to relate, //I
dont tol-er-ate lack-luster lim-it-ed traits
rally the hate, yo, Ima man of action,// cata-
strophic reactions- retract ya wack tracks son"

i just like the rhyme scheme on this even tho it seems a tad off on when it switches

Sik gets it