16978, this is far too close yo
Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Oct-12-05 05:03 PM
i like the concept of poem 1
and the 2nd was more straightfoward
on one hand, u have a descriptive metaphor being played upon and in the other there is more of a personal account of actual situations
hmmm, i felt poem 1 was incomplete tho and so im going to go with poet 2
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