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16964, RE: MY Line in the Sand
Posted by marijane, Mon Sep-19-05 09:12 AM
I liked this in a very unconventional way. It gave me an eerie sense of self-observation. Sort of looking at yourself through my eyes in a mirror. Keep shining!

>It'll only really hurt if you listen
>

>And even though I speak with a ring of truth-
>I'm just another liar with my very own noose
>So I loose my vocabulary on the world as an incediary device
>and my words float on wings of justice through cemetary's as
>advice
>The dead have endless attention spans
>Man's greatest feat is to ignore all it can


>Its how far back you draw the line in the sand.