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16914, Snitches Posted by marijane, Mon Sep-26-05 09:53 AM
((read in spoken word voice))
I'm so sick and tired of being sick...and tired of being.
I love my self. spoken word is my voice but by choice I despise the rise and f a l l of the spoken word voice.
overused the muse for poetic views has been jaded faded into the distance
for instance I was at a venue where pretention was on the menu and they sang the def poets' song of airy voices over swaying beats?- I grimaced my face at the poem about nothing new and witnessed the light being sucked from the room- vaccumn
nothing but space with no life in site more than willing to resite or rewrite the painfully overdone
one level speach stuck in monitone doin' their best snapped impressions of Love Jones coffee house writings with natural headed patrons neo-soul beats sweet smell of candle lighting
and art on brick walls and art on brick walls what a scene for cliche that art on brick walls while the he say she say speaks between those brick halls
and if it weren't for the pop culture, for the Chrystler, and Dodge ... you wouldn't even know what a Spoken word was
so take off your cuffie (sp?) put back on your white tee cause the Kinte don't mean spiritual and those 'locks don't say free
you've been playin with my culture too long
I just call it like I see it so like God
I speak a- word into existance powerful prose preacher so, use your regular voice and listen to it drop spoken word: for today I just need ya to
STOP!
Keep shiining! I know some of ya'll can feel this sudden infultration of our sacred culture never know you might be one of 'em.
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16915, Man Posted by flashiusclay, Mon Sep-26-05 12:51 PM
I be FEELIN you... I hate that cot dam spoken word voice, it makes me want to thug as hard as humanly possible off gp... Might pop a bottle of Cris and I aint even like that..
But I dug this piece, you're a talented being MJ.
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16916, Gangsta, Gangsta Posted by marijane, Mon Sep-26-05 04:02 PM
tell me how you do it!? LOL Keep shining!
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16917, how do i do what Posted by flashiusclay, Mon Sep-26-05 07:31 PM
sincerely, what do you mean moon?
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16918, just punnin' Posted by marijane, Mon Sep-26-05 07:43 PM
off you wanting to be gangsta with the spoken word cats. That's just a quote from a beenie seigal song.keeping shining tho'
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16919, This was tight Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Mon Sep-26-05 02:18 PM
I've seen this happen. It's sad. But people clap anyway, cuz we're of the "conscious" crowd. Full of "love" and "appreciation" for people's art. But bump that, if it's jaded, it's jaded. And you brought that out all through this piece here, love. This was great. Thumbs North. ~one~
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16920, Thanx ya'll Posted by marijane, Mon Sep-26-05 04:01 PM
this was TRUE love. No snaps PLEASE. Yo I like being called a being (so poetic) allowing me to briefly disassociate myself with my plight of womanhood and large breasts!LOL keep shining ya'll I guess everyone else is using the voice and has no idea why I'm so aggy over it. Well tommorrow's another day and hopefully another piece. LOVE.
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16921, RE: Snitches Posted by AidenWaves, Mon Sep-26-05 09:27 PM
asi es la reina de la cypher, palabras! i hate when people can't be them, and change their style to be more "mainstream", but yall aready knew that. LOL! write on, write on!
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16922, the queen rains Posted by marijane, Mon Sep-26-05 09:34 PM
yes rains but can't purge cause Aiden waves the cleansing fire. LOVE
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16923, Archive!! Posted by hdub, Mon Sep-26-05 11:32 PM
I loved this
would love to be sitting there as you read this live
and im sure someone already told ya but its kufi
very very tight
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16924, thnax Posted by marijane, Tue Sep-27-05 08:30 AM
No no one told me yet but I already knew it was wrong. I spell badly in every language I know. What can I say I'm a writer. LOL Keep shining! thanx for the LOVE
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16925, RE: Snitches Posted by tonka truck, Tue Sep-27-05 09:33 AM
trust no man- the BIG J
tell them to fuck off
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16926, up n/m Posted by Shakeet Lokh Em, Wed Sep-28-05 01:31 PM
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