Hmmmmm...A ninja is an interesting metaphor for this monster. I liked all of Poet 1's language and imagery. I was very drawn in. But Poet 2 was um...I 'on know. Sum'n. This grabbed me the most...

>as.i.die.slowly
>i need the world to cradle me
>in her bosom
>and not be afraid
>of serous fluid
>seeping from lesions
>that are the end result
>of the way you loved me
>and the way she loved him
>and he loved he
>and they loved it

Yeah...they not knowin. Love it man.

Vote: Poet 2