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Topic subjectRE: And now the main event ......LIF VS. WHATEVEA
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16809, RE: And now the main event ......LIF VS. WHATEVEA
Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Sep-28-05 11:58 PM
>yo, 1st things 1st, let me paint a clear view/
>anytime i see you, it'll be in my rear view/
>now i got that out the way, what i got on my plate?/
>oh nah, he outta place, i'll check'em out at his wake/
>Philly's most phoney, it might be that u been fake/
>so i'mma drag ya name from 9th Street up to Ben Frank/
>and write til ya pen break/
>but u could never touch tha boy even if u stretched out wit ya
>limbs straight/

this is very solid, i like the swag to it, not the most creative but still hot

>look! 1st pay ya dues, I'mma send u a invoice/
>flow keeps my pen moist/
>And don't be getting all mad at me dawg, cuz this battle was
>Zin's choice/

lmao, heat

but the rest of it is good but not straight heat, the audio makes it sound good but its not heatrock, but its solid and i think he gets the job done efficiently but the way i usually measure it is if the punchlines are the flow makes me jealous i aint spit it first and the closest i came to that was the beginning and the end...

Whateva >>>>
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>Prolif, I received ya message, first off, I'm not a fag
>Secondly, you not allowed to inbox a white flag

this is a funny image, i give u credit even tho the flow on this line coulda been tweeked a lil bit

>You ran ya course, ya time short, like bees without a stinger
>Now, you grabbing less attention than a phone without a
>ringer
>schemer, Like BIG said about ya girl, don't bring her
>I Been in wifey more times than her index fingers

this is all meh to me, not feeling it but not penalizing u, ur length hurts u more then this filler, the index fingers is funny but not heat

>You unstable Lif don't step to me without a bannister
>I'm enlightening, Enclopedia Brown and Brittannica

this is the hottest line of the battle, if i give u this battle, this line alone is the reason why

hmmm, the rest is kinda wack to me tho

so ima give it to Prolif

but im really feelin this line, u be almost there everytime yo, good battle