16806, RE: And now the main event ......LIF VS. WHATEVEA Posted by hdub, Wed Sep-28-05 11:01 PM
damn this is close
first off, lif gets points for bringing it in audio- the beat was tight (again a beat i liked better than the cliche joint) although one thing is those "whoo's" are corny to me
BUT- as far as i know this is a battle of written rhyme skills so im gonna try to not include the audio in my evaluation
and that being said i gotta give this to whateva, altho by the SMALLEST of margins
tho this was the best line of the battle:
>of course, it aint no safe haven/ >so i suggest u evacuate my borders now - i'm Ray Nagin/
i thought the rest of lifs rhyme was pretty much been there done that shit- and this part was just whack:
>to Whateva u pop, i'm like "Whateva, whatnot"/ >and Whateva u not is like Whateva i got/ >got ya crew saying Whateva u drop are big "ifs"/ >you might can spit a little, but not like Big Lif/
also points lost for using words that dont rhyme- you make it work on audio but on first read it came off whack i already deleted the rhyme but the first example is frank up top and i think the second is hoarse or something
as far as whatevas- i really dug this line:
>You unstable Lif don't step to me without a bannister >I'm enlightening, Enclopedia Brown and Brittannica
also dug the mumra line cause thundercats was my shit back in the day:
this was whack tho- like he shouting out lifs name in a verse against him- and "fickle to the T"--- i dunno how well that works
but the flow of this whole thing whateva wrote was nice- you a dude id like to hear an audio from
anyways whateva's was a little short for my taste and not his best work lyrically but like i said lif's was old news- im your dad, puns based on types of sicknesses, fans not receiving you
plus i feel like if i was hearing two MC's of equal skill flow these live whatevas would have more interesting parts
but like i said this was close as hell and could have gone either way- nice drop from you both, looking forward to seeing next week's matches
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