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16439, RE: be cause i am a poet
Posted by gsquared, Tue Aug-02-05 10:36 PM
this is all good, this here is special:
>>fall beneath
the oil lamp
chronicled by extremities
that curve with every emotion<<

and the way it curved on through the ending was balanced like a
nice jazz solo and that's the advanced poem...





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Rubbing together
Like kindling sticks creating forest fires
~Slow Burn~
My turn to speak in tongues"

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