16439, RE: be cause i am a poet Posted by gsquared, Tue Aug-02-05 10:36 PM
this is all good, this here is special: >>fall beneath the oil lamp chronicled by extremities that curve with every emotion<<
and the way it curved on through the ending was balanced like a nice jazz solo and that's the advanced poem...
"Motion of the Ocean Lotion Rubbing together Like kindling sticks creating forest fires ~Slow Burn~ My turn to speak in tongues"
--Photosynthesis
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