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15609, Trace!!!
Posted by Intrepid Vixen, Tue Feb-22-05 12:32 PM
I definitely liked this from the beginning on down to the end. You had that creativity flowing and the incorporation of the "people vs. the characters" was just too nice!!! I'm glad that this caught my eye. And the ending line....CLASSIC!

Beauty is in my ear
I sketch beautiful
rhythms with a pen
my thoughts
artfully articulated
into harmonies of
~*~ KSB ~*~

"My fear is my only courage."
Bob Marley