just heard it homey, damn man you need to find a soundproof booth where you can just scream, cause the idea behind this is gold, the delivery just came off a little held back. you are def on ya way, you can tell you got that drive in this too, just gotta keep droppin more and sharpenin up. you just gotta figure out if you want a fierce voice where you yell louder or the laid back swag style which takes more time to develop, seems like you lean towards the latter more. beef up the volume, and a little more emphasis. as to other people's bitchin, people are gonna say things that contradict each other, and even themselves, the point is if it hits you as something you should change, than do, otherwise fuck it, dont worry about the fuckin growl to make other people happy, just spit whatever's comfortable. keep droppin more audios too man, I like hearin the improvements. besides that, a plethora of props dunny. peace