Okayplayers, its crunch time.... whos got the stamina to keep it movin'? Once again I'm gonna post your name and your opponent’s name. This roung the matchups were NOT random. You have until 10am EST on Wednesday to put ya verse in my INBOX …(remember my INBOX...not email.) I will post both verses as soon as they hit my inbox ..if ya late you get DQ'ed …so you lose ..

FYI, unless there is a double dq, wel will have an uneven amount of emcees for round 4. Any ideas of how we should handle it? Any way..
Match-Ups:

Prolif VS Instant Axis

hdub VS MiracleRic

MCee VS Biohazard

n/m

it may actually help u out in the long run but that would eliminate a final round if u lose in the semis, anti-climactic but intriguing

but then someone would have to choose the match-up, or someone could accuse me of choosing the easiest opponent. I kinda like this idea though.....

the matchups...say...Shakeet?

n/m

Yeah I was gonna say you should go in against the winner of Bio vs Mcee, since they both won with a first round DQ, or Instant Axis if he beats Prolif, since he was an Alternate. Make em' earn their spots!

my shit's in- good luck ric

may the best verse win

i know we got the whole week to look sat this thread and it's no good to blow the whole wad at once but i'm fiending for some more battling action

as mills lane would say (anyone remember him?) let's get it on!

hdub:
i been rising faster than jacko’s dick in a schoolyard
my strato-spits leave behind bastards-- ric you just drool hard
i school ‘tards— you my newest special victim
laying down the law i orders up slick twisted rhythyms in written
i’m more sick than sodomy- kidding??-- he’s gotta be!!-- i shock ric- lobotomy!!
there isn’t- no topping me- dub’s ripping-- unstoppably
i’m spitting sweeter than filling, killing his chances like poverty
don’t bother me-- i seen too much of ya ric-
been feeling amiss since hitting your ‘click wit’ them pics of ya tits!!

http://fileserv8.soundclick.com/images/m/song/miracleric+aztectouch2.jpg

PEEP THIS!!!!!! ^^^^^^^^^

then ask yourself this question:
which one of his boys took that shot of ric in the fleshin’??
just guessing- truly doubt it was a chick-
he’s never been alone wit’ a bitch ‘cause ric looks like a twix!!
a stick!!- light weight in life and in posts
ric’s toast wit’ no votes- vanishing quicker than ghosts
i hosts wit’ the most **meaning MC superior**
grab this joke by his throat, expose boasting exteriors
get his second neck broke- i rock, from tops to posteriors
no motives ulterior- i’m aiming straight at the crown
i faced the best in each round- and i’ve knocked them all down
like bobby brown- i make messes of divas
rics newest pose?- frown!!- so hot, spit the essence of fever
once the most hated in town- now dub’s found him believers
sharper than cleavers wit' more bite than a beaver
i stay giving young bucks growing pains like them seavers
get medals gold like retrievers- ric gets nothing but bronzed
i’m cooler than fonz- leave him froze and conned like billy d did wit’ han
the tourney’s don- running shit like i’m gotti
now on to round four!!- yo!- beam me up scotty!!!!


MiracleRic:
“fathers day”


I got ya card this weekend
It read: “yea dad, I know I was weak then…
But u gave me the building blocks
And now im considered real skilled with drops
And even tho u killed me pops
I still feel ya style is more ill then a million pox
U make me feel brilliant, hot,
And yet small and chicken
I know u the most raw with writtens
Battling u twice is tryin to quickdraw with mittens
Why should the king of the jungle brawl with kittens
But in case u spit a verse of heat and win,
At least don’t say hearse or skeet again”

Aint that cute aus? But duke lost,
and there’s no time for breadcrumbs
its time for bed son, cause as soon as this web’s spun
Miracle will turn past cats from flashbacks into red rum
its over…kill like rocky part 5,
i was proud I could give my seed an archive
but enough with this hallmark vibe…
The board wonders why u even bothered to show
I God-fathered ya flow, steez, and rhyme scheme,
Im king! And nine fiends wouldn’t vote against
Me if u offered em free coke and visine
Along with hints of god’s schemes
My illness has no cure, meds, pops a purebred
Ive got the game sown up, ive even improved ur threads,
U all grown up, but a vet with ric’s calm text
Knows how to avoid an Oedipus(s) complex
First time u lost, hunter coerced voting…
This time, its cause u lack punches that’s worth quoting

I'm almost afraid to be the first one to vote on this. Cuz I know cats are watchin to see what the consensus is before they vote. But anyway, lets break it down:

>hdub:
>i been rising faster than jacko’s dick in a schoolyard

^Yo you went hard with very first line. I laughed so hard at this. I see you took note of your verse last round where you came out a little slow. Good work.

>my strato-spits leave behind bastards-- ric you just drool hard
>i school ‘tards— you my newest special victim
>laying down the law i orders up slick twisted rhythyms in written
>i’m more sick than sodomy- kidding??-- he’s gotta be!!-- i shock >ric- lobotomy!!
>there isn’t- no topping me- dub’s ripping-- unstoppably
>i’m spitting sweeter than filling, killing his chances like poverty

^clever filler

>don’t bother me-- i seen too much of ya ric-
>been feeling amiss since hitting your ‘click wit’ them pics of ya >tits!!
>
>http://fileserv8.soundclick.com/images/m/song/miracleric+aztectouch2>.jpg
>
>PEEP THIS!!!!!! ^^^^^^^^^

^This was funny by itself, but the fact that you accompanied your written verse with a picture is hilarious. That made this whole section an evil, heartless, attack on someone's charachter. Which in battle rhymin is essential. Excellent.

>then ask yourself this question:
>which one of his boys took that shot of ric in the fleshin’??
>just guessing- truly doubt it was a chick-
>he’s never been alone wit’ a bitch ‘cause ric looks like a twix!!

^Also funny.

>a stick!!- light weight in life and in posts
>ric’s toast wit’ no votes- vanishing quicker than ghosts
>i hosts wit’ the most **meaning MC superior**
>grab this joke by his throat, expose boasting exteriors
>get his second neck broke- i rock, from tops to posteriors
>no motives ulterior- i’m aiming straight at the crown
>i faced the best in each round- and i’ve knocked them all down
>like bobby brown- i make messes of divas

^Clever indeed.

>rics newest pose?- frown!!- so hot, spit the essence of fever

^Any reference to an emcee being hot as a fever is cliche and overused. I've done it myself. It kind of takes away from your originality.

>once the most hated in town- now dub’s found him believers
>sharper than cleavers wit' more bite than a beaver
>i stay giving young bucks growing pains like them seavers
>get medals gold like retrievers- ric gets nothing but bronzed
>i’m cooler than fonz- leave him froze and conned like billy d did >wit’ han
>the tourney’s don- running shit like i’m gotti
>now on to round four!!- yo!- beam me up scotty!!!!

^Good way to close. Not great, but good. All in all dub, you got a really hot verse here.


MiracleRic:
“fathers day”


>I got ya card this weekend
>It read: “yea dad, I know I was weak then…
>But u gave me the building blocks
>And now im considered real skilled with drops
>And even tho u killed me pops
>I still feel ya style is more ill then a million pox
>U make me feel brilliant, hot,
>And yet small and chicken
>I know u the most raw with writtens
>Battling u twice is tryin to quickdraw with mittens
>Why should the king of the jungle brawl with kittens
>But in case u spit a verse of heat and win,
>At least don’t say hearse or skeet again”

^It was a clever concept to go with a father/son theme, but this whole section was unnecessary. I mean it wasn't bad by any stretch, just...I guess...clever filler is what I'm lookin to say.

>Aint that cute aus? But duke lost,
>and there’s no time for breadcrumbs
>its time for bed son, cause as soon as this web’s spun
>Miracle will turn past cats from flashbacks into red rum
>its over…kill like rocky part 5,
>i was proud I could give my seed an archive
>but enough with this ...hallmark vibe…

^HARD. That should have been your whole steezy all the way through. You commented yourself on the 'Hallmark Vibe' the verse was taking on. But this part is that heat we want.

>The board wonders why u even bothered to ...show
>I God-fathered ya flow, steez, and rhyme scheme,
>Im king! And nine fiends wouldn’t vote against
>Me if u offered em free coke and visine
>Along with hints of god’s schemes
>My illness has no cure, meds, pops a purebred
>Ive got the game sown up, ive even improved ur threads,
>U all grown up, but a vet with ric’s calm text
>Knows how to avoid an Oedipus(s) complex
>First time u lost, hunter coerced voting…
>This time, its cause u lack punches that’s worth quoting

^Again, this is that fire that we want. Excellent lyricism.



Aww man. When I first read the verses through, I was gonna give it to Hdub on the strength of that picture he put in his verse. *shakes head* lol But after dissecting this, Ric just came so hard in the latter part of his verse, that it kind of balanced out. But I can't vote a draw, which is what I want to do. I'm going to take my gut feeling of a draw out of the equation, and based on the math of how I broke the verses down, Hdub wins by the skin of his teeth.

Vote: Hdub

I can't say that U guys did n-e thing less than hit a home run. Man U guys did the thing, but now I must vote.

MY Vote: Hdub-U came strong and two the point

2Lettas Says: I can go terrorist on U, find yo house and bomb it
My lyrics are so sick...it'll make a mortition vomit!

this ish was funny as hell!!!!!

Dub had me going with this one:
like bobby brown- i make messes of divas
rics newest pose?- frown!!- so hot, spit the essence of fever
once the most hated in town- now dub’s found him believers
sharper than cleavers wit' more bite than a beaver
i stay giving young bucks growing pains like them seavers.

from this part til the end was pure flame.


this here:
I got ya card this weekend
It read: “yea dad, I know I was weak then…
But u gave me the building blocks
And now im considered real skilled with drops
And even tho u killed me pops
I still feel ya style is more ill then a million pox
U make me feel brilliant, hot,
And yet small and chicken
I know u the most raw with writtens
Battling u twice is tryin to quickdraw with mittens
Why should the king of the jungle brawl with kittens
But in case u spit a verse of heat and win,
At least don’t say hearse or skeet again”

best punch of the tourney thus far imho.

this was unadulterated swagger.


these 2 verses are what the battle is all about. flow wise it's second and third to lif's first round offerning.

i gotta give this one to ric though. something must've happened cause the first two round were actually lackluster. dubs verse wouldve bested any other verse in this tourney thus far. cept this one. dub you must've lit fire under his ass or something.

the reason i been avoiding that overly creative shit is b/c it doesnt fall well with the voting lately, the fathers day shit to me is the ultimate punch and swag combo, his picture things was aight but another cat lookin at my pic is i dunno...not a bad thing...but sayin u sonned someone style and then u illustrate it in a clever way like that...that shit is just funny as hell to me

but this might be close so we'll see...

Short and sweet... Hdub came harder than Ric...Though the Father Day thing was a nice touch... I just think it lagged on too long. Great stuff from the both of yall

Vote = HDUB

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"My salvation is salivating"---Rass Kass

"Consider me fear because I shear ideas"--Kool G Rap

"Really dope needles are needed to inject this"--Kool G Rap

both squared off nicely...but just for uniqueness..imma go with dub on this...

<---Ben Wallace apreciation

summerjam, haha didn't even realize that. funny ass comparison, hdub's takeover

Yo I think that was the illest battle yet on this site for the record. It was ill how Miracle started his verse with a letter to his son (Hdub), mad creative and without doubt one of the most innovative disses in the king o Da Ring. But I think you could have came a little bit stronger in the rhyme scheme. Hdub just seemed more hungry, coming out of the woodworks with some Tyson in his prime type punches. But I don't think anyone has ever, In this tornament to my knowledge, has posted a link in the middle of the verse to show Miracle Rics Titty pic, That was mad ill. This was a definite rumble in the jungle, But I am going to have to take the lion over the snaggle puss cat..

Peace..

Vote: Hdub

i agree his or wait is it my rhyme scheme (lol, i keed i keed) was a lil tighter but i thought that father son punch was just strategically masterful, and just fuckin below the belt and wrong, he had a very nice verse but being the 2nd person in this tourney to look at my pics, the fact that he linked it didnt make it any hotter to me, but it takes away from the originality of the verse to the pic for the 2nd round straight...it was a high-quality verse and quite frankly im kinda glad to be out now, a lot of shit happened this weekend and i just wanted to do my sonning and bounce, good battle dub

....no comment for now- i aint trying to get caught up in our usually shit talking cause im not interested in getting myself banned or anything

i think heads know most of what i'd say to this anyway

all im gonna say for now is good battle bro

Alright break it up, break it up!!!

hdub: By far, your best rhyme yet. The rhyme scheme didn't get in the way of your punches. Fierce wordplay, and a link posted in the middle of the freestyle. Gimmicky, but since the rest of the verse was solid, I felt like it was a creative touch and not just something to help the rest of your verse out.

Miracleric: Not one of your strongest rhymes. The creativity with the letter was nice, but I felt like you underestimated hdub this time (psst..we all did..shhh).


I actually thought it was a miss match at first, but hdub put his foot in that rhyme. I'm real surprised.

Vote: hdub

Going forward --

Remind me never to be sippin' on a soda while viewin' an hdub battle! -- *Photo Wipes Computer Screen*

Damn Sun -- You been in da gym pumpin' lyrical weights, huh? -- ;)

You ain't right fa' that pic link -- :P*chuckles* :P -- But it did add a lil' extra summm summm to an already heated flow~stream -- *Yuuuup*

(((Not only blazin' with the lyrics -- But brought a touch of visual comedy to da ring)))

Nice job! -- *Very Nice*


Ric darlin' -- You put a creative twist on this ish with an acid Hallmark kiss -- *Burned Nice~ly* -- And as always, ya lyrical skills were wicked & wired for combustion.

~But~

I felt the fire burn hotter and higher on hdub's side of da ring.


MY VOTE: hdub


Edit: What's funny is I remember Zin sonning you, cuz he felt like your verses were fertilized with HIS sperm -- and your flows were just like his -- (Like Father/Like Son) -- *chuckles* -- And at first, he wasn't very happy about the similarity in y'alls rhyme~styles either, nahmean?

I guess you learned well, huh? -- :9 -- *Happy Fathers Day*

this ish mad me laughing up a storm. hdub you came ridiculous with your verse, you took it, but ric's verse wasn't weak. in this type of battle, you either vote for 1 cat, or the other.

peace
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this battle was gay as superman....both of yous shouldnt win.tie

well Hdub... i truly enjoyed your peice..

you ripped it! with word play and rhythm... encore
i would love to battle u sometime for practice

ric.. youre good too.. but too many commas and excessive jargon makes it hard to follow..
(still the same critisizm i;ve given before)
but u do make me laugh tho..


-lol I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...

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This is a great website to discuss spirituality/religion, philosophies, and post poems:www.aware-discussion.net
www.3kingsmusic.com < for spiritual

and dont ask me shit!!! about y i voted that way

Where are they?


Let the battles begin ---------- AGAIN! -- :)


What are we waitin' for?

Right that hdub vs miracleric got me anxious for another battle...whats the hold up?
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"My salvation is salivating"---Rass Kass

"Consider me fear because I shear ideas"--Kool G Rap

"Really dope needles are needed to inject this"--Kool G Rap

is this still going? or did the cops break up the fight club? yo Know what's up, I know your posting around. just make it lif vs dubs and winner takes you, or give an update or somethin

...all up in gd and shit

i had thought dude must be too busy to get to his computer

if heads dq'd then they dq'd

i mean i understand a little extension but this is getting ridiculous

I think Im gonna have Prolif & Bio battle & the winner takes on you.

nah i see why you did this- its a shame to see so many dq's especially this late in the game

i just was fiending for some word on when to expect the verses

do what you feel on organizing the last few rounds im definitely cool with that idea if everyone else is

one thing i want to say is that friday and saturday im gonna be on a plane so if theres a verse due on those times im not gonna make it

if its due before friday i should be cool as long as i get advance notice so i know to find time to get to a computer

if i dont see some shit up before i leave on friday ill check in on sunday or monday-- cant commit exactly caus ei dont know exactly what this will entail

im traveling all week so im sorry to be so sketchy

i didnt think id be in it this late and after this week my access will be real limited but i do not want to get dq'ed so im gonna make it a point to make my deadlines

anyway senough of my schedule

good luck everybody its been heat so far and im expecting to see a lot more

Ax is DQ'ed

Prolif:
Aiyo
this battle's over, aint gotta' spit! but that's what i do!/
take ya whole verse Inst, it won't match my Haiku!/
Lif be abnorm, Ax through u! u half torn!/
this dude aint got bars, he write in paragraph form!/
while my bars are indecent; flow behind'em in the precinct!/
and of ya 1900 posts, 'bout 5 of'em were decent!/
they say tha best meet at the top; that's where the crown is won/
i guess that means ahk, i shoulda faced u in round 1!/
and ya sound's done! to tha bench u get deflected/
'cause now the only thing Instant 'bout u, is ya exit!!/
aint got tha balls playa! par, u tha cause of it/
u aint a all-star playa! - dawg, u just a alternate!/
ya lines off centered; think ya Axis i broke/
politikn' nicca! campaigning and asking for votes!/
NO! u aint tight fam; so get ya flow right and!/
get dough from a white man & go pro being a hype man!/
i'm PRO-LIFE man, but abort & kill ya blank spot!/
could thow a "Sause" beat on ya, and u still aint "hot"!/
this man-in-flesh, manifest war in our first meeting/
aiyo, somebody tell ?uest that this tha board's worst beating!!/
can't stand it; Ax branded when i bang my stamp on!/
reprimanding and i'm demanding u change ya tampon!/
get ya records, keyboards, mics, and pens only/
must notta' got tha note - this fight's for men only!/
aiyo, Axis laboring in pain - he spectating/
leaked ya shame, 'cause it's only 1 way to get impregnated!/
San Diego don't like u! the whole Cali don't like u!/
the east coast wanna' fight u! aiyo, trash that recycled!!/
this kat i spit on, once i chew ya average bar!/
Ax i piss on, like dude in ya avatar!!/
and it's a fact that Lif gon' leave a buzz when i'm finished/
cause Ax, i leave like Ilena's cous-in in Menace!!!/

("dawg, i'ont think u know me" -- Cain)

You a fool Lif. This is pure skill.

"while my bars are indecent; flow behind'em in the precinct!/
and of ya 1900 posts, 'bout 5 of'em were decent!/
they say tha best meet at the top; that's where the crown is won/
i guess that means ahk, i shoulda faced u in round 1!/"

this whole thing was heat but especially this:


>Lif be abnorm, Ax through u! u half torn!/
>this dude aint got bars, he write in paragraph form!/
>while my bars are indecent; flow behind'em in the precinct!/
>and of ya 1900 posts, 'bout 5 of'em were decent!/

and this

>Ax i piss on, like dude in ya avatar!!/


damn

good shit as usual lif-- even though this was a DQ after seeing this im sure the outcome would have been the same regardless

funny thing is ax is the dude who talks about breaking contracts lol

MCee is DQ'ed

Bio:
You's a bastard, spittin' fish shit like bass turds
I'll leave you fractured, your body cast in plaster
Spit your last words before the lethal injection
It's the master against the feeble apprentice
I'll beat you relentless, make you sputter like a motorbike
Eat you for breakfast, man, you know my butter flows are tight
You's soft like Pillsbury puffs or Hilary Duff
Leave you busted up, toothless, thinkin celery's tough
Man, MCee raps gently
With those empty rhymes, scared to pay the entry fines
You get sent behind, from the main pack
Blowin' all that hot air, you're bound to burn your brain black
Son, that pain tax will leave your pockets empty
But still, spittin' wack rhymes ain't gon' stop the rent fees
Man, you lost again, G, don't quit your day job
Or you'll be stuck in the street eatin' shit like stray dogs

the end of this joint had me dying for some reason, funny shit

^You could have won on that line alone.^ Your verse went downhill from there though buddy. Get your game together for next round. But that first line had me bustin out laughin.

ill say this-- i dont think bio has any chance against me or lif or know

BUT

dude has been steadily improving in each round

im not gonna count him out cause obviously he could surprise us all but either way another month of this and i wont be making predicitons about dude in advance

I'm 14, I've got time to improve.

for real!?!?!

mad props homie you better than a lot of the full grown folks on here

i thought you were around 18 and i was STILL saying you got potential so that says something

you definitely right

Thanks, man. Just a kid rappin' as a hobby.

>Just a kid rappin' as a hobby.

thats pretty much where im at too- except im 20 so i guess im a big kid

definitely looking forward to see you continue to grow

Check it--
Call me the Chemist with the ill verbal premise/My mic presence reflects a legendary essence/MCs serve a life sentence for a despicable crime of biting my rhymes/They all stars but Im the sun so naturally they get outshined/And I don't bang gats/I bang out backs of chicks that got more curves than indy race tracks/Facts are facts/Im down to make stacks but I won't sell my soul to do it/I'll just keep the heads bobbin with some innovative new shit/Hard like a dick out of prison/Niggaz wish they had a 5th of my wisdom, but Im claimin sole position/Although Im bout to blow I ain't never touched da coke/I'd rather roll a bag a Li and get lifted off some herbal smoke/I get high wit my niggaz/Stay fly wit my niggaz/Plotting on the come up on how we gonna make the bigga figgas/I see the bigger picture/My flow is biblical giving you true hip hop scriptures/Im everything that you'll never be; so don't mock me/These aren't words, this is prophecy/Sketched on the tomb of an undiscovered legacy...

you're like a month late homey, nice drop though. put this in a new post so people can comment on it and shit, this thread is a tournament thats been going for a while, there'll be another one later. peace

oh yeah welcome to okp