15026, RE: This is a result of constructive criticism Posted by hdub, Thu May-26-05 12:35 AM
well however you got it you got it
but ive noticed you getting better and better as a result of feedback- this leap is something else its extra energy that came as a result of writing from such a deep spot in your heart
i know you wrote this and all but fuck that- im saying it how it is
you just too modest bro
> >P.S.And this is by no means professional. lol This is somethin >I did at work. I'm still refining my style, but when I get it >all together, it's gonna take a nation of millions to hold me >back. ~one~
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