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14941, lyric-wise: Def1. punch-wise: MCee
Posted by blaksilence, Tue Jun-14-05 09:51 PM
if Def1 would have shortened his verse
and added some weight to his punches
he would have taken it

because this is thorough wordplay/lyricism:

>so inclusion you're ruined Im including the bruising
>concluding the shooting of dope verbs will soon then
>demolish you and Im calling you
>out just to see you falling through
>my trap Im schooling you from pre-k to college du...


But MCee was just funnier/better

example:

>Def1, I wouldn't let a Def1 hear you,
>No fear fa dudes who spit pointless like lightin fires in
>pools,
>No one ta compare me to, i'm rarer danna lion chased by
>caribou,
>I'm cannibal, like animals, in zoos widout food,
>Why you spit, i'm tryna solve dat mystery like Scooby Doo,
>I guess you similar ta Keys, you got niggas sayin boo,
>Maybe Mike Jones too, say ya name, dey like who?
>Def1, worthless, you can't trade pennnies fa jewels,
>Ya bumb rap get smashed, lunged at da sun when we clash,
>Hungry fa dis like a fat nigga waitin fa a snack,
>Crush you like Big Pun wit da flow, matta fact,
>Da mic crushed in my grasp son, brush up on ya act,
>Iss no contest, i'm hotter by da largest margine,
>Armor anna shield couldn't fend you from my pen's offense,
>Mentally scarred like concentration camps was in my bars,
>I shit on emcees, yo ass needa stop fartin', peace

yea that's the whole verse.

Overall Score:

MCee- 8.2
Def1- 7.0