haha, nah man I feel you. big part of this is being able to understand the flow, you just happen to get it cause you know him, I didn't cause I don't. it's all a style thing anyway, if it's hot to you more than the other one then you should vote for it. I just think hed get more votes if he had a structure that was easier to follow along with, cause it's hard for some people to see where the rhyme pairs match up. Some people don't have a problem reading it like this though, I just usually see it easier if it's written in bars, or something of that sort.