14719, Rajeniro 757 in a blowout... Posted by DVS, Tue Jun-07-05 04:28 PM
Auriz Deep...as others have said...you were a bit lengthy. But even with that length...I didn't catch more than 4 or 5 solid shots throughout the verse.
Look at your 1st four bars...aight?
Now compare that to this...
Look you coming up short like midgets in elevator quadriplegic waiters and ants in escalators my flow reverse the gulf stream they can feel me at the equator
Peep...an extended metaphor for the 1st 2 lines...each alone would be a cliche. But TOGETHER?!? That's a MONSTER!...
Anyway...I'm tired an I ain't over analyzing you guys...just trying to back up my claims so cats don't think I'm dick riding.
Vote: Raj with ease.
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