14702, Zin... Posted by Whateva, Tue Jun-07-05 09:07 PM
Frontline's rhyme scheme was just.. ...difficult.
I reread it and still couldn't feel it.
I got optimistic at these lines:
I keep the punches coming while my fists keep clutching/ Put more substance your flow is just rushing// No misspellings, Pure Perfection I got MYSELF blushing/
The ending was okay, but not enough.
I know I've seen better from Zin though.
Vote: Zin. Good luck next round.
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