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Posted by Whateva, Tue Jun-07-05 09:07 PM
Frontline's rhyme scheme was just.. ...difficult.

I reread it and still couldn't feel it.

I got optimistic at these lines:

I keep the punches coming while my fists keep clutching/
Put more substance your flow is just rushing//
No misspellings, Pure Perfection I got MYSELF blushing/

The ending was okay, but not enough.

I know I've seen better from Zin though.

Vote: Zin. Good luck next round.