Okayplayers, here we go I am going to post your name and your opponent’s name in the subject header you have until 8pm on Tues to put ya verse in my inbox …remember it’s only one round so you lose and your out ...(make sure you vote even after you lose)
I will post both verses as soon as they hit my inbox ..if ya late you get DQ'ed …so you lose ..

Round 1 Match Ups

ThaAnthology VS nuke

DVS VS hdub

MiracleRic VS flashiusclay

BarTek VS MCee

Biohazard VS mzwilliams

Zin VS FrontLIne

Prolif VS Shakeet Lokh Em

Rajeniro757 VS Auriz Deep

sikstyle VS Whateva

southernboy_423 VS ToeJam

jayare214 VS McHanson

def1 VS TRIQUENO

Prolif vs. Shakeet Lohk em in the first round? This should be interesting.

n/m

Yea... I ain't seen this dude post but twice in the N-Tensity thing...

Just wanna say man... I've been in a creative mood this week so far. Good luck...

I dunno where his flow game, his lyrical game, his punch game is at...
Ah well... don't need em. I'm just battlin myself in the first round.

Im goin up against Zin...coo

use ur own discretion partner, i would keep it from at least 12 to no more thatn 24 but spit til u finish

I already got mine in... told ya, I'm in a very creative mood... it's lethal.

I spit like what... 25+ bars I think. One of H-Dubs I last read was too long... actually it might have been the archived... and it just dragged and dragged. But mine, N-Miz, is killer. Ah... got another line... wow, I can't wait.

Come on 757... I can't wait.

(I love battlin, I can show a cocky side that you all don't usually see...)

too short and it may look like you fumbled...

too long and we'll get bored and may not even finish reading....

wow. some hot ass 1st round matchups, but the one that jumps out at me is dvs & h-dub.....that i gotta see/read/ whatever you wanna call it. good luck to all the rhymers.

....lol

i might still be new around here but im an avid student of the archives so i know who's who around here

i like it- kind of gonna be an old school vs. new school thing

let me say before entering battle mode that i gotta give dude props for basically getting the tourney thing started up around here

and just so you know- i been watching you too a bit aus, from what i gather you like the dre of these boards lol

you got a link for any of those tribe type beats? i been wanting to check those

anyways enough with the pleasantries, it's time to rumble

***donning my screwface

fuck all y'all!!!

i didn't start it...but mine was the 1st successful one...

So...with THAT being said....in the immortal words of THE CHAMP in "Harlem Nights"

"D-d-d-don't t-t-take this a-a-a-ass whippin....p-p-p-personally!!"

g'luck, family...I think my verse clocks in at just a little bit over 24...so bring ya A-game

...

>g'luck, family...I think my verse clocks in at just a little
>bit over 24...so bring ya A-game


had a lot of errands over the past few days, haven't been able to spend the kind of quality time with my bong that a tourney like this requires

i'm gonna get at this this afternoon

and dont worry whateva- i got you too

>
>g'luck, family...I think my verse clocks in at just a little
>bit over 24...so bring ya A-game

...it's what the one we've all been waiting for

i got mine in

get ready, as the sun sinks low in the sky it's almost primetime

yo, try not to choke on your t.v. dinners when you read my punchlines

>>MiracleRic VS flashiusclay

^^^This is where the actions gonna be.

Lotta weak MFs in this shit, preteens better go watch 8 mile or somethin...

*Goes back to torrential flood monsoon brainstorm

i was just waiting for thetrembling to begin, lol

I got dirt on you doggie

and yet, how often do u see me on the shorter end of any stick (no homo), im talkin shit, but anyone and everyone is gonna read reply # 10 and translate it as "why i have to draw rick on the first rd?"

u can have all the dirt u want, if u questioning whether u gonna make it outta the opening rd, game over, let the swagfest begin

Youre the only one who thinks my post was on some why "I gotta face ric? Slow down youre givin yourself a lotta unearned cred.

Check this out,

You love my style, you bit my style (yeah you did), and you cant rap in real life. Why would I be scurred of my son who aint even nice anyway? Send me your shipping addy and I'll write my autograph on my winning verse so you can frame it and tell your co workers about it when I'm famous.

Nor the place

after actin shook, and whether he thinks his reply sounded shook or not doesnt matter, that shit is suspect, if im so weak why should i be in the final round? read ya reply 10 and make all inferences from that...how cocky are u really?

Did I not already outline in block letters why nobody should ever worry about you? Dont act like this is that serious, nobodies battin an eyelash over you. I still listen to that weak ass audio you posted way back when I need a hearty chuckle so dont get ya head too swol...

Ha! I couldn't resist.

Seriously, though? Y'all both gone have ya shots at one another...so y not just shut the fuck up and channel that energy into ya verses?

Just a thought.

Oh...and don't worry about flaming on me. I've already accepted the fact that I suck monkeynuts.

:o)

DVS for Alderman.

and yet he claims i should be in the final round...he has yet to bring that up, no amount of dirt can look past the fact that u shook of someone u have dirt on...fall back

your wordy posts betray your fear

A tournament! To be King of the RING?!!! GIVE US BACK OUR PRECIOUS, NOW!!!

...this post was perfect for you dog

cosign, that shit had me crackin up

If Ric don't kill Flash...

I will... dam man. You frontin cuz there's young dudes in here... trust me... after this you gonna feel babied the way I son ya. Or any other young dude. But...

Til then.

Good luck.

we could go right now off the tourney and I would mop the cafeteria floor with your peach fuzz curfew havin ass. You dont want it w/ his mightyness. I seen ya weak ass verses too kid, them shits wouldnt even chip my armor. Stay outta grown folx business!!

Ah man... why you even scared enough to have armor anyways??? Just in case right?

Case in my favor.

Edit---
Are the match-ups in the second round just selected by you... or is there supposed to be like an imaginary bracket between each 2 matchups?

where are battles gonna be posted?

the verse is in ...

Just got my verse in...

Sikstyle:
you know me man,, I'm down to do Whateva
he knows he can't do betta- soft like hello kitty sweaters,
fuck him up in Philly so-bad his-mom'll get-scared
she'll make him pack his bags and send him-out to Bel-Air
too bad you aint a prince cause you could never be king
un-skilled to hold my mic unless, you wanna try ta sing?
I hopped the boards a rookie, quickly grew to rook:
*attacking with straight lines*- until the game is took,
so now you gonna listen?!! or do I have to remind you?
read the sig a few times, my crew is right behind you!**
outshine you at the speed of light sik blinding to ya retinas
rhymes are quick to bind you til you hiding like a witness,
so test this- testify and find ya sleepin restless,
smack ya with a sack of pennies til I beat ya centsless,
I'm scentless, ya fowlish rhymes is hittin me flagrant,
ya spits is pretty shitty in more meanings than frangrance


Whateva:
I mentally adaptive, beware what you attack wit
I'm adept to delivering beretta/nine/mack shit
Ya style sick cause ya flow need medication
In rainy season dawg you can't dodge precipitation
My flow is sickening but as a slang for ridiculous
you write like a caveman I spit the meticulous
I'm sick wit this cold shower shivering shit
solitary confinement thought delivering wit
I spit like a surgeon operates, words populate
rumors multiply so all my wins propagate
sikstyle topple me ha you must be kiddin
Dawg take the sick out ya name you fibbin
You couldn't get a piece if you wore a yellow ribbon
I'm a battle cat nigga you's a pettable kitten
I got pinky size verses that will leave you bed ridden
I leave mics hot, and after, peddle oven mittens
I'm leaving you in a bad position, out of commission
Got Mayweather precision, unanimous decision
Like the speed of light I'm too swift for ya visions
Don't bring a tank to contest nuclear fission.....

You need more practice sikstyle....



Votes.........

Whateva came with it, but Sik was just...sik. lol And Whateva, how you compare yourself to Battlecat and I've had him in my avy for a week. GET YOUR OWN 80'S NOSTALGIC CARTOON CHARACHTER!!! Sike I'm jokin yo...No i'm not. lol

nm

Sikstyle:

>she'll make him pack his bags and send him-out to Bel-Air
>too bad you aint a prince cause you could never be king
>un-skilled to hold my mic unless, you wanna try ta sing?
>I hopped the boards a rookie, quickly grew to rook:

Hmmm... this part right here was alright... it lacked sumthin tho...
the 2nd and 4th line tie into eachother good... and first and 2nd... 3rd just seems outta place


>smack ya with a sack of pennies til I beat ya centsless,

I like imagery... lol


>I'm scentless, ya fowlish rhymes is hittin me flagrant,
>ya spits is pretty shitty in more meanings than frangrance

closin is pretty good... the punches throughout never came through that hard tho man


Whateva:

Hey... this was a good piece. Nothin jumped out at me apart from the others, but that's for sayin that it was all on the same level. Flowed really well...

>I'm a battle cat nigga you's a pettable kitten

Lol

>I'm leaving you in a bad position, out of commission
>Got Mayweather precision, unanimous decision
>Like the speed of light I'm too swift for ya visions
>Don't bring a tank to contest nuclear fission.....

Nice endin.

Vote- Whateva

(Whateva takes it) Sik's verse was sik too though...keep rappin

...everybody so far voting for sik, and you are the one person so far who hasnt

this must be a coincidence

lmao

im gonna be real surprised when you and your other whack homies vote against me too

zin finished his verse- why dont you go work on that instead of sitting around ya house sweating my boy

Auriz deeps vote was 4 WE...like i've said over and over I'm just being real and i already put in my verse...
Edit:And now southern boy, like I said earlier it was a close battle...

....i got nothing but respect for whateva


im just pointing out that you been waiting forever for a chance to hate on me or sik

this is what always happens, i put your posts on blast and then you get mad- if you really are voting honestly we got nothing to worry about just ignore me people will see it and i'll just look like an asshole

well shit- i'll probably look like an asshole anyways but that's just what i do

lmao

Hey... I voted 4 Whateva, sooo... I dunno why you'd think he'd be votin against...

...unless you want to go back and read the bullshit back and forth discussions i've had with this dude in full then stay out of this one

i didn't say shit about your vote did i? or knowone or southern. im only on this dude and there is most definitely a reason

you may think this is a coincidence now but if you werent just talking out of your ass to up your post count you could see that this dude is a hater

dont get mad and start yelling at me about this now- sit back and watch the tourney, if you dont think this dudes hates by the end of that then come talking smack to me

besides- is he your girlfriend? you gotta jump in and defend himm against big bad mr. hdub???

lol

Nah... you just said he was the only one that voted for whateva... so that's sayin sumthin bout my vote. And I had ta correct you... so...

Just so everyone knows.

yeah fair enough- i only glanced at the shit and you had a lot in yours when i peeped it after your comment i saw it went down further

....whateva came with a real strong rhyme scheme but the first like 10 bars were all jokes about the word "sick"

sik's verse was just more diverse with the punchlines

damn the shit was hot!

**thinking***

the penny roll centless line was creative as hell
but.....

Vote - Whateva


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....and so it goes, im at it again. Fix ur fucking face, Im in the building!

No message

sik said some shit
but whateva's seemed to hit hit harder

my vote>Whateva

what a shock! now the alias that voted for frontline against zin is now voting for whateva against sik

but now im crazy they not hating

watch the mods delete this one too

i dont care who wins either way,but that mos def is suspect

...a vote for frontline and zin, along with a bunch of comments from me and shakeet calling it out- i just don't think he's been on since

n/m

ima give it to sik b/c i think he brought the most clever line of the two with the rook and straight lines ish, i think this is one of the weakest verses i seen by sik, and whateva, u did aight but u just need a lil more polish and you'll get there,

sik gets it by the hair of his adams apple

Highlights:

Sikstyle...wasn't too many for you, doggie. Punches were decent but not spectac...and the gay metaphors kinda detracted. That's kinda the easiest battle tactic, bredren. Still...you had a few...

fuck him up in Philly so-bad his-mom'll get-scared
she'll make him pack his bags and send him-out to Bel-Air

*cute*

I'm scentless, ya fowlish rhymes is hittin me flagrant,
ya spits is pretty shitty in more meanings than frangrance

Your best line in the battle...way to end strong.

******************

Whateva...what won it for you was your cadence. You started off decent, but I wasn't really riding with you until mid-verse. You seemed to pick up steam as you went along...always a plus.

Faves...

I'm sick wit this cold shower shivering shit
solitary confinement thought delivering wit
I spit like a surgeon operates, words populate
rumors multiply so all my wins propagate

*Sick...SICK wordplay! I pride myself on doing shit like that...but you even aced me on these 2 couplets.*

I'm a battle cat nigga you's a pettable kitten
I got pinky size verses that will leave you bed ridden
I leave mics hot, and after, peddle oven mittens

*nice metaphors in these 3*

good battle to both.

>Sikstyle...wasn't too many for you, doggie. Punches were
>decent but not spectac...and the gay metaphors kinda
>detracted. That's kinda the easiest battle tactic, bredren.

metaphors is my shit, not changin my style for anybody, don't really give a shit if it gets me the win or not. and its not the easiest battle tactic, easiest would be to rhyme about how I'm gonna shoot you and shit like that, metaphors actually involve creativity. From most of the shit I seen on this site anyway, the easiest way to win is to say you won at the end outside of the verse anyway. This was a weak verse (for me), but I didnt feel the need to come that strong cause I threw in enough hot wordplay. fuck this though, after more people vote if I make it to the next round I'm going into gory mode if thats what people want. peace

"too bad you aint a prince cause you could never be king
un-skilled to hold my mic unless, you wanna try ta sing?"

this line was tough...like a upper cut or somen'

"I'm leaving you in a bad position, out of commission
Got Mayweather precision, unanimous decision
Like the speed of light I'm too swift for ya visions
Don't bring a tank to contest nuclear fission....."

but this was the K.O.

both yall cats flowed though....this was a good battle

vote: Whateva


"duck cause i struck with the soul of motown/my central broadcasting systems is low down" -- gza

.

n/m

sig reference, since KnowOne cut off the end of my rhyme, I'm changing it today, so for anyone reading this later:

Now you gonna listen?! Or do I have to remind you?
I'll punch a hole through your chest and give a pound to the man behind you!"
-Chino XL



WHATEVA:

good shit, looks like you're gonna take this round. At least we kicked this shit off right, good luck. peace.

keep rhyming sik. The Bel-air line was heat.

Sik takes my vote.

i read it ....slik was hot but what ..left a lasting impression i read both then re read the first to see which one shines ...what just had it to me ...


this shit here

You couldn't get a piece if you wore a yellow ribbon
I'm a battle cat nigga you's a pettable kitten
I got pinky size verses that will leave you bed ridden
I leave mics hot, and after, peddle oven mittens

____________________________________________________________

A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

This one goes to Sick. Yo I like the line about smacking bro with a sack of pennies till you beat him senseless. But hats off to Whatever though he brought da hotness..

Peace.

Sik....

Your verse was entertaining and slacked off late..

Whateva's didn't keep me entertained.

Sik got my vote.

Zin:
Dear, Danny Alberti
How you gonna FRONT like you and average mcee
Or even “my status” mcee
With LINES weak as mime’s speech …
My dyme’s … reach into the front court of your thoughts…
To score punches …like weak mc beating was a sport …
Them weak lunges …fall short …
trying to box with the cardboard champ…
ya LOE amps …don’t hold the voltage …
to flo toe to toe ..with …
this 9 volt … holy scroll co wrote
malignant …shit spiting individual …
sending electrical …unethical words to get rid of you …
notify …ya next of kin would you!
they screaming Dead man walking
with coroner’s chalk …
and specs. for feet out pines boxes
I’m bury you upside down …with ya ankles out
Black ya 3rd I (thoughts) to take ROOTS …and hopefully
You’ll sprout out of ya lime socks …
I spend to send them to the dark …
You had a lil glo …but this here verse is where ya shine stops …
You got to the FRONTLINE ... but you hopped …
So back to the end ENILTNORF …(entitling this Norfolk)
nugga to teach you … how to kick rocks …
spit like big cock …
and log into battles with equipped wit punchline modems and bitch block
to out line you like Hitchcock
FRONTIN but you couldn’t equate
One win … with ya calculator wrist watch …
Zin … hot as sweaters …
But makes mic cords neck mock …..
And squeeze mc’s with it till the kicking and struggling stops …


FrontLIne:
Zin...spin around put down your pimp cup/
360...abstract you're about to be mauled//
By a pup treat you like a sick dog in a pound/
To me...your style is just gaunt and depressing//
Gone with the wind...leaving the whole crowd guessing/
I have vanity for what I write.....I feel the weather//
Don't need to see what YOU write because its guaranteed jilted/
Delicate flower you've gone sour your stems become wilted//
You're like a shiny old car showing all but saying nothing/
Wrists clipped typing mad like a bad wolf huffing//
I keep the punches coming while my fists keep clutching/
Put more substance your flow is just rushing//
No misspellings, Pure Perfection I got MYSELF blushing/
Not even close to touching my unique FRONT sound//
Didn't think I had game? I got the rebound/
Like a drunk B-Ball player just drop the ball now/
The shot clock is over just sit your ass down//
Tryna to throw a knucle fast ball pitch to me?/
Wrong game amazin' this aint no pitchers mound//
Niggas didn't even think I'de pass the first round/
H-D..MCee it’s................the underdog take a look at me now!//



votes...................

...you still misspelled knuckle front

the funny thing is as much as i dislike frontline and his whack crew i would still love to see zin get done in the first round

sadly even tho zin brought the "C" game in this one it's not happening

front had generic punchlines and a poor flow

zin wasn't at his prime but he coulda been two levels below and still took this one

I misspelled knuckle damn I suck...

...was that you had finally spelled everything right- but in actuality you didnt

im sure if i paid more attention to your whack verse i could find a few more errors too

its not that hard to press spellcheck before submitting your shit- many people have said this to you not me

you gonna lose in here when you go back and head to the drawing board try to remember this shit

it may be hard to hear about how whack you are but im really just giving you advice

damn I'm gonna have to really call you a hater now dawg...4 example Zin has shit misspelled but fo some reason i'm whack because i misspelled 1...

...neither zin or anyone else has EVER put up a verse that i've seen as misspelled and mangled as the shit you and your boys put up here

maybe isolated typos but nothing like your garbage

besides even if zin did make a bunch of mistakes he never said this:

"No misspellings, Pure Perfection I got MYSELF blushing"

YOU just said that- and despite saying that you didnt have the sense to make a 10 second investment of time and hit spell check

call it hating if you want- many people have said this to you about your rhymes- you can just reply to me incessantly and be angry or you can listen to what people are saying about your verses

i dont see any point in writing rhymes online in a group setting like this if you're going to ignore criticism

if this is how you react to feedback you should just leave and go work on your "album" with no outside input and just your boys telling you your shit is hot

or you can learn- my guess is that none of you are remotely hot on audio, this keystyling is all you've got so you'd never leave this place even tho right now you are preventing yourself from getting anything but negativity on these boards

but dont listen to me just keep shit talking----

i love catching people in their lies and whacknesses within comments, believe me i could do this shit all day

>neither zin or anyone else has EVER put up a verse that i've seen >as misspelled and mangled as the shit you and your boys put up here

I just forgot to put a "k" what the fuck...i've only put up 1 verse on this site...ur full ov shit

...ive only put up one verse on this site

get the fuck out of here

every time i think this kid is as whack as he could get he just amazes me by taking it to the next level

you want me to go back and paste some of your shit in here??

this is the second time ive caught you blatantly lying in a post

you so whack you trying to deny your whole career

lol

first off you act like 1 verse in 80 posts would be something to be proud of- but secondly you are just straight out not telling the truth

do you think people are stupid- do you think they dont read posts?

you do ridiculously whack shit like this and then act surprised when people receive you negatively

The only person i've ever responded to in a negative way is you... and i know how many damn verses ivé posted here and its three ONE from that whack little battle, one I put to introduce myself, and the 1 from this battle I ONLY COUNTED the 1 THAT you said was BADLY misspelled because U DIDNT SAY shit about my old stuff...stop acting like a detective...YOU constantly call me a hater yet I don't hate what the fuck is a matter with you?...

....you were gone for a bit- on another login perhaps??!?!?!

it's no wonder you want me to "stop acting like a detective"

but im not doing anything smart you just obviously lying and being a dumbass

furthermore

i wasnt talking about how you have responded to me

since i have NO respect for you as an artist your responses on here mean nothing to me

read it again- slowly and carefully, i was talking about why i and many others have responded to you in a negative way

confront that fact and deal with it

Ohhh my bad the only person that responded to ME in a negative way is you...and stop accusing me of going on wit an alias i got other shit to do....I'm done wit yo crazy ass..peace

it seem like Frontline held back, and he couldve came stonger

vote - Zin

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....and so it goes, im at it again. Fix ur fucking face, Im in the building!

Yea... this was close... but I gotta say Zin. Frontline, it seemed as if you jumbled your words, got your meanin messed up, with the old car line, for instance...

Zin

LOL @ "So back to the end ENILTNORF "

FrontLine, I had a little trouble followin your rhyme scheme. You had good punches though. I laughed a little. But the flow was kind of confusing. But good verse overall. You just had the misfortune of drawing Zin first round.

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frontline you had it til the one line you wrote that has been pointed out. I really don't care about spelling but when you make a proclamation like that you can't slip up.

he won with the C+ game on this one

Front, ur flow started off awful, the punches were...off, the flow improved a little but u just didnt have that many pluses with that verse, u might wanna study up some ish yo

Frontline...ya punchlines were awkward and not really memorable, doggie. I could follow your cadence...but I just didn't feel like you were saying anything of substance.

Zin...awkward structure aside...ya flow was complex, you bounced around your sounds ill...and you had some solid body blows in this shit. If Frontline's verse was better, I'd give y'all the highlights...but it wasn't, so I ain't.

this line cracked me up yo, i forgot to mention it

"and specs. for feet out pines boxes
I’m bury you upside down …with ya ankles out "

thats a funny ass image, lol

FrontLIne, i'd love to hear u spit this one b/c the punchlines were tight, i just couldn't follow the flow

Zin, i've seen many better verses from you - maybe this was a warmup rhyme

vote: Zin


"duck cause i struck with the soul of motown/my central broadcasting systems is low down" -- gza

I didnt feel any punches from FL.

Frontline's rhyme scheme was just.. ...difficult.

I reread it and still couldn't feel it.

I got optimistic at these lines:

I keep the punches coming while my fists keep clutching/
Put more substance your flow is just rushing//
No misspellings, Pure Perfection I got MYSELF blushing/

The ending was okay, but not enough.

I know I've seen better from Zin though.

Vote: Zin. Good luck next round.

Zin

if you really know me you know i had a long weekend ....and i didn't want to just get out of the tourney ...but i had good reason to ... frontline i thought you had me ...i was just sending something to say i sent it ...but now everything is alright ....and i won .....whooops to the back of the line .....NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!

NAh man for real good battle ...real good battle thanks for keeping it respectful

wasn't feeling either.

I'm thinking these cats aint dislike each other much.

Rajeniro757:
Look you coming up short like midgets in elevator
quadriplegic waiters and ants in escalators
my flow reverse the gulf stream
they can feel me at the equator
punch you so hard you will need a defibrillator
you a mighty morphin masterbater, exacerbate your
posibilities you can't win in reality
so that leaves the dream world
with you dream girl lapdancing me
where i skeet skeet on your beat street
i'm in the front row
you sitting in your dads seat
i'll tell you to say a prayer
and take you out before your palms meet
i'm fucked up
got a hit list on my cheat sheet
seldom seems you people see me on this scene
as i split you from nut to gut
leave trademarks on your spleen
redicule your resume with me rhyme routine
rewind my last line and play it at the rapture
as i send you straight to hell with bullets chasing after


Auriz Deep:
You wanna act hard? go ahead, I got rocks to discard
but on the mohs, you nuthin but talc
you wanna walk the walk and rap? nah, you can't even talk
I'm a diamond by the way, I'm blockin out your internet rays
Like an E-Clipse, and have you grindin all day
tryin to stick it to a man, but you ain't got no glue
more or less no clue... they gotta use salts to make you come to
when I knock you out, but that don't make you flavorful
without a doubt, you full of nuthin but bull
Speakin of bison, I'm king of the ring like Tyson
you may have your similarities, but just because you style bitin
and a chicken
seizures have you kickin
like at a soccer game
I have never once lost my aim
I will snipe you from afar, so just let go
of your dreams... I'll have Rajeniro twisted like Rio de Janiero
you a zero, then like the snake river...
cuz the venom I'm spittin when you're bitten goin to you liver
then out your chest, your breasts
enlarged like you got estrogen
the straight fire will burn out ya oxygen
just straight imagine, I got an aura that shine brighter then halogen
why you smilin? I thought before I'd have you for a while in
my choke hold
but infact you never tried to get plowed
you never posted anything but a load
of boston b/s... what you marky mark?
you scared to be compared with me... cuz the contrast is so stark
I'm big as a shark... you nuthin but a flounder
that's why you ain't gonna be a second rounder
sumthin smells fishy? it's cuz you been smokin 24/7
I'll launch ya higher than a boeing 757
and have to refuel, you outta gas, at a 7/11
a date for renewal, kick ya ass, ya cryin more than a weddin
why you medlin? you all pale, you outta melanin?
this peddlin you do... what are you tryin to be sellin in?
why you tryna be like cassidy... your fake ass hustlin...
the only thing you hustle... is all of your many men
*drops down and dies from his own prowess*




Votes......

Auriz Deep, the length of your verse killed u doggy!

your shit was filled wit punchlines, but u spit a lit bit too long

your verse died down and picked back up, but it was good

vote - Rajeniro757


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....and so it goes, im at it again. Fix ur fucking face, Im in the building!

n/m

On the principle of knowing when to STOP. Auriz, your joint was too long man. Not taking away from your punches, but it was just too much.

i cant believe auriz was talkin like he would hurt shit...
that verse was terrible.
i can tell from how you write you aint no real rappa potna, stick to double dutch.

I'll take that... I haven't written battle verses be4... not tryin ta make an excuse... but this was my first, so...

Gj man... didn't think I had written that much...

Out

Pieace

And flash... shut up man... plz. You full of bullshit. I'm still a young dude learnin... and what the fuck are you doin???

Remember, I'm the leader of your future if you got one. I'm decidin what kinda coffin you lay in... so respect the next gen

I'm conducting a clinic on how to write raps. you should sign up.

u couldnt out-spit my warmups

and ima continute to show this until u explain how u aint shook

" should've been the finals"

implying that u and me are the only 2 worth anything in this tourney...meaning u respect me despite whatever "groundbreaking" dirt you have on me, (lmao, same shit diff day,) and after i call u shook, u do a 180 and claim im wack, whered the respect go? id be scared of me too tho, and then u got the nerve, to say i bit you, lmao, i been on the boards long enough to babysit duke, along with half the whole tourney brackets, and you make another claim, "im taking credit i havent earned" ???? roflmao, i was not only king...u know what fuck it, the verse explains the rest, lmao, i love my job

You dont even SPIT in real life!!!

I'm afraid the Masquerade is over...

If you so hott I can learn sumthin from ya. School me.

We reviewed your transcripts and we have decided you do not have the credentials to participate in our course. Maybe next semester

he took this one kinda easy, auriz's length wasnt a problem to me, if it had been heat, it woulda been a nice length, but his punches just werent there, neither of them had great punches, but rajeniro just ouflowed him, if u not gonna have pure punches, at least lace the fuck out ya flow and bring in the swag

Auriz Deep...as others have said...you were a bit lengthy. But even with that length...I didn't catch more than 4 or 5 solid shots throughout the verse.

Look at your 1st four bars...aight?

Now compare that to this...

Look you coming up short like midgets in elevator
quadriplegic waiters and ants in escalators
my flow reverse the gulf stream
they can feel me at the equator

Peep...an extended metaphor for the 1st 2 lines...each alone would be a cliche. But TOGETHER?!? That's a MONSTER!...

Anyway...I'm tired an I ain't over analyzing you guys...just trying to back up my claims so cats don't think I'm dick riding.

Vote: Raj with ease.

.

757 is been represnted to the fullest ...i mean that is if you from here ......whew

i got no choice but to rep. the 757

n/m

"Look you coming up short like midgets in elevator
quadriplegic waiters and ants in escalators
my flow reverse the gulf stream
they can feel me at the equator
punch you so hard you will need a defibrillator"

hottest lines in the battle in my opinion...too many others

vote: Rajeniro757

"duck cause i struck with the soul of motown/my central broadcasting systems is low down" -- gza

Nice solid effort from both, but Raj's verse was more polished, so he takes it.

strong beginning, weak middle, nice finish
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A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

not feeling either

ive submitted mine already, im sure flash has too by all the trash hes talkin in order to cover up his shookness but the deadline is 8 tonight, i doubt know has had a chance to submit the battles that hes recieved today so it probably will be a better turnout than it looks, who knows, if its a lot of cats mia, he may extend the deadline

@ Dr Gonzo

i'm hoping his verse is on the way.

considering the fact I keystyled mine (pre-proofread and resubmit) in 25 minutes at the job...he should be able to fade me pretty handily. (insert evil laughter here)

C'MON CLETUS!!

...you not waiting on me, we waiting on knowone

...lol

seriously tho i cant wait to see this

i cant be the only one can i?

i want to see my battle already i hope i dont win by dq i wanna win because of rhymes

DVS:
I run thru H-DUBles like Helly Hansen...
Androgynous Marilyn Manson....bitches get fucked by the stanzas...
My pedigree is oxidized and rusted...
Double Decker punchlines on motherfuckers....Simple and lackluster...
The metaphor madman at random use time as a weapon...
Your steps are so half-assed…they LEGEND!!
I run up in ya rest on an equestrian shitting on ya minutes and seconds...
Break out my wallet and show you a SNAPSHOT of perfection...
DEMON...the Tasmanian Devil, spit fire at winds...
Flames be licking at my Timbs...shatter pipe dreams on a whim...
My style is mummified excellent like Egyptian Pharaoh...
You at the shooting range trying to BUCK back with an ARROW!!
My eye is on the sparrow...
Ya chance is narrow and slim as the needle they insert to replenish the bone marrow...
I breathe heavier on niggaz than asthmatics...
Saw you try to spit 12 but it sounded like dogs fucking over static...
I'm on higher levels than Tibetan Monks in a cave...
Hit you so hard with INITIALS, its like ya CHEST was engraved...
Dominant Vernacular Spectacular Demon Voracious...
Spat Doodoo Venomous while Decadently on Vacation...SIMIAN!!!
Parking Brothers like I sunk ya Battleship....
Only question when I serve yo ass is if you wanted CHIPS!!
And for the simpletons, I GUESS I'll take a dip...
I'm phonetically, genetically....eternally THE SHIT!!
You intelligence impaired follicle of pubic hair!!!
Better pray to the inbox, nigga...'cause KNOWONE really cares!!
Dug in my grey matter and let the neurons analyze you...
My lyrics batter grills...even ya MOM'S won't recognize you...
Then hit the studio and give you 24 to RIDE to...
It takes more than a random pairing to make you a rival...
I cling to microphones like babies do tits for survival…
Then mutilate genitalia like an African Tribe will….

With love…

DV the Demon


hdub:
the first round- destined to be ya worst clown
messing wit’ a king, dub gunning for a purse now
i steps in t’the ring, shut whole omniverse down
dub pounding earth down- rhymes finalizing a grave
like ric said- "hearse found," i’m analyzing the page
suffocate wit’ well versed nouns, my styles is ablaze
i rises in rage- with my eyes on the prize, my rhymes- ya demise
it’s time fa goodbyes- ya ambition to spit gets quick circumcised
this dick jerker dies, ya found lurker, bye!
NFO goes so highs- we owns the most guys
you known for old times- i flows those bold lines
challenge ya whole status, by rocking gold rhymes,
poppin' old divines- i drops dvs’
my style leaves heads breathless like bed sex’s yes’s-
dub blesses every edit wit' the best tested methods:
obsessive, head wrecking- spit exacting-
my mic checkin’- bests whole factions, in seconds
i beckons- like tekken to foes in the tournament
turn men to hood ornaments, no redemption not born again-
ya sonned like a morning when, my flow heat rains pouring in
like skeet stains from whoring men- i carries disease
such ill steez- dub sick like ovarian bleeds
like marion b’s- you musta been cracked out,
shoulda did backed out, you’re son of sam summer kid
blacked out-
i maxed out, ‘cause shakeet said: “yo, keep it short”
if i lose it’s corruption! peep those oliver nort’s

Wow... this is ill... a really good battle. But, DVS gets it. He/she came harder, more flow to it. Dub didnt come with the same ferocity... maybe it was just the caps... but

Vote- DVS

dub i hate DVS as much as i hate you so don't say i'm hatin ...i just think he brought ...and one hitter quicker style to ya ass ....i had bets on this battle too .....Dub you came better than i thought you would you really surprised te hell outta me ....good show lil man ...but i think DVS just used to battlin here and he knows how to give the people what they want to see ...and that's showman/get in your ass type steeze and he got in your ass with it ....good battle

hot shit. dvs had rawer vocab, but seemed like a lot of it was just for the sake of using the words. lotta hot shit in there though, just kinda erratic. dubs had a smoother flow, and the rhyme scheme was better, with ill punchlines in there too. 1

DVS:
"I run thru H-DUBles like Helly Hansen..."

"You intelligence impaired follicle of pubic hair!!!
Better pray to the inbox, nigga...'cause KNOWONE really cares!!"

hdub:
"dub blesses every edit wit' the best tested methods:
obsessive, head wrecking- spit exacting-
my mic checkin’- bests whole factions, in seconds"

i thought this one was tit-4-tat...DVS definitely brought thunder and this was one of hdub's better rhymes in my eyes....

but for the use of extreme assonance (look it up nucca's...lol) and alliteration, i
vote: hdub


"duck cause i struck with the soul of motown/my central broadcasting systems is low down" -- gza

Punchlines: DVS had some very hot and harsh joints at the end
Flow: HDUB flowed dvs under a table

however, it took so long for dvs to get to punches that i thought worth it, beginning was wack as fuck, the ending was hot as hell

and for hdub, the whole thing flowed nice as fuck, but ur punches didnt really stand up that well

my vote: draw, i cant decide yo, i really liked the flow and consistency in dubs verse, but dvs ended with some really nice ish...i may have a few more reads and edit it but i dont know

By FAR Hdub's best flow I've seen. I couldn't call this one for a while. Both of you guys had me dyin laughin. Yall stupid man. lol I actually had DVS winning before I even read Dub's verse. I didn't think anybody could come back from that. But Dub proved me wrong. The bastid tryin to steal my self-procalimed 'Rookie of the Year' title.

'such ill steez- dub sick like ovarian bleeds
like marion b’s- you musta been cracked out,
shoulda did backed out, you’re son of sam summer kid
blacked out-'

To this day I still remember watchin that video of Marion Berry coppin blow. Funny as I don't know what. I laughed at this for awhile. So for me, these lines were the tiebreaker.

Vote: HDUB*

*But you'll never take my R.O.T.Y. belt. lol

you wheres your battle with prolif? and a few of the others- i know for a fact nuke didnt dq and im assuming you two didnt either

i guess knowone's making it last...

...speaking of that video you ever see the one of al sharpton SELLING blow?

he was in a cowboy hat- if i remember correctly don king was somehow involved

anyways im looking forward to seeing the rest of the battles, thanks for peeping, even to those who voted against me- nothing worse than a battle with no votes

and dvs whatever happens it seems like the consensus is that this was close (i would disagree, but as always that's anbother story....) anyways, respect bro, hopefully once this tourney's over you wont go all awol from the boards again, i wanna see more of your shit

I submitted my verse this afternoon. And I know Prolif is lickin his chops, tryin to destroy me in front of the masses. So I know he sent his in already. We just have to wait. Ehh well.

Emcees have no legs to stand on/ they get broke like Joe Theisman//
Shakeet spit and be the first freshman to win the Heisman//

~one~

i was late getting mine in last night...we had a major power outage for several hours....i submitted it already though...we'll see if i'm dq'd or not


"duck cause i struck with the soul of motown/my central broadcasting systems is low down" -- gza

DVS came with heat, but for me, a lot of the lines simply didn't make sense. They sounded great, but that's it.

Hdub-One of your best flows ever. The last two lines should have never seen the light of day though.

Good luck next round to whoever wins.

nice battle:

dvs: punchlines came more solid toward the end, but it still was a battle verse, u could tell he was spittin at someone even if it wasnt a battle

hdub: style, he had real flow wit his shit. he put a real "look at this nukka" feel to his verse, but i have seen his come better

vote - hdub, i reread, dvs didnt get straight to the point wit biting dub's head off, so dub's flow won my vote


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....and so it goes, im at it again. Fix ur fucking face, Im in the building!

This was the hottest battle thus far, however in my eyes it was a stalemate. i wished one of ya'll would draw some extra power from the planet on some goku shit and just finish it. ya'll punches was heavy as hell. i can hear theses rhymes on beat. both tough as shit. fuck that i cant leav it a draw so i give it to dub by .000001 on the strength that i could take this in the booth and flow it easier by that margin. i'd give you ghost credits tho'. LOL. this was hot kids. yo DVS whatup on some audio pimpin'? i know you got some in the stash. us lurkers gotta stick together.

Both very good verses but Hdub takes the cake on this one.

Holla.

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A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

i can't believe this is the same hdub... way to step it up man
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A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

n/m

b/c i felt my vote wld be biased
as i am an old school deevee fan
& a short-term dub hater

but, i call a draw
b/c id like to see them both advance
& tho i enjoyed much of deevee's rhyme
i liked the 1-2ness of hdub's & i cld really
HEAR this much more than the first

so a draw
i read it twice

best of luck to both of u
gentleman

DVS

Here is the status.... I received a verse in my email from the following address:
crispysnare@yahoo.com

ALL VERSES SHOULD BE SENT TO MY INBOX! When you email me it does not tell me the okayplayer name the email came from. So I dont know who those verse belong to. Let me know ASAP so I can post them. As of now I am still waiting on verses from the following people:
ThaAnthology
flashiusclay
TRIQUENO
jayare214
McHanson
ToeJam
mzwilliams
BarTek

I am extending the dead line to 4pm EST. If not received by then anyone missing will be DQ'ed.

First line mentioned a bunch of nationalities

My fault

Prolif:
aiyo,
check the archives, u get the worst crowd feedback/
dude begged the admins for a 1st round rematch/
what u need black, is somen' to make ya' soul throttle,/
some attention at home and maybe a role model/
cause ya' scripts so hollow, black, ya' bars start to echo/
Lif's flames spark and target through ya black market retro/
u aint ghetto! u trailer park; u only hustle lies/
thinking u finally made it now cause u own a double wide/
get ya' goals up, ya' lumps down, and ya' flows up!!/
u should rap about ice the way u punked down and froze up/
and we know wassup; - back and chest so pale/
shook! screaming S.O.S. - dude u S.O.L.!/
cause i specialize wit' u awed, in making crews flawed/
u specialize in faking & imitating Ru Paul!/
too tall on the mic for this midget in pre-school/
hey ya'll - i'll be in round 2 in a minute, so be cool/
had to school my pupil - give'm somen' to save/
but please don't call him stupid cause he keep flunking the grade!!/
Keets took a L on this test; got more bars than zest/
"BZZZZ!!" ya' wife just texted me and said i'm the best/
i would'a hit her back, but i was laughing from the fact,/
that she said u the first emcee to never have a track/
ya' record label called; they said, they'd never have u back/
ya' crew emailed me dawg; they said, they never got ya' back/
don't ever call that 'rap'! even though that's what u meant to/
ya' best bet - log off for good and work on instrumentals!!/
i'm in to burning mics wit' ease, and blowing up blocks/
Prolific melt Keeters keys, then i thow out tha' Lok/


Shakeet:
I’m back at it/ the emcee automatic//
Your styles bent outta shape like a flimsy Craftmatic//
I spit tragic/ like babies who swallow plastic//
Lif never Pro enough to follow my semantics//
My flow’s tantric/ sparkin like Buddha blunts//
When I’m done you can’t get to Nirvana soon enough//
I can’t be touched/ the Hebrew Ark Of The Covenant//
Be sure when you click my post that you got on your oven mitt//
I got flavor for the masses/ from niggas to pasty bastids//
My rhymes a healthy diet, but stacked thicker than molasses//
I’m classic/ Sha clairvoyant, you stay with the jurassic//
Your flow is dry and flaky, need some lyrical chapstick//
I know you Marvel cuz I spit fire like the Human Torch//
Lif talk a slick game, but just another monkey on the porch//
So I exhort/ Put some real effort into your work//
Peasant, keep lookin for royalty like Kool Herc//
Shakeet’s berserk/ My lyrics gotta nympho thirst//
I impregnate minds with science in one skeet squirt//
Like Ernie and Bert/ you sweet like Mrs. Butterworth//
In this rhyme arena, I got more game than Jesus Shuttlesworth//

Both of ya'll flowed the hell outta this. I feel it was one of those things that if i had acapellas, i'd be makin' remixes for days. ya'll flows was that ill. respect.

as far as the vote tho' i gotta give it to Lif on the strength that to me his punches were a tad bit more sinister. this was a real close one imho.

that jesus shuttlesworth line damn near did me in yo, that shit was...*makes unintelligble noise*

im leaning towards Prolif but that S.O.L. line was used in one of my joints, and i hate when i see one of my punches that i think i worked better, not that it wasnt hot, but mine was sick as hell

"and pap smears, i smack queers
with fresh quotes this west coast geek
should lay off the abestos, speed
cause im one bad S.O.B,
the reason ya S.O. grieves
so please dont spit with that estro-steez
i got the best flow hell...
/heaven/or purgatory
my murder stories leave you s.o.L."

then again, he used s.o.s, and he probably didnt peep this cause dude didnt even respond...this is hard

I wanna give it to Sha for that one line i thought was the sickest in the battle but Lif had more

My vote: Prolif

Muggies was sayin this when you were playin Hasbros. Real talk. U cant even rhyme in real life. How many times do we have to go over this?

and keep takin L's, get off my dick and read the writing on the walls black...FALL BACK

so shut up, get sonned, log off, enter lurk mode, exit ya mouth off my cock, and keep it moving, see ya next tourney

I know if I couldnt rhyme and I was poppin all types of shit, I'd probably tear up every time I looked in the mirror.

Look dog, bottom line, if your mic game aint on point, u aint no emcee. Issues of swag, flow, spits and punches quickly become moot if ya cant even spit...

Nigga, your raps sound like a homo phone sex line. When I heard you rhyme I actually felt sorry for you. Which dont mean shit, but don't act like you're a King when you know in your heart you're a herb ass peon.

my acapellas will shit on u on any beat of your choice...period, explain why i practically never lose, u gets no love son, u half ass, u obviously havent heard the more recent shit, that weak shit dont work son, when u lose, i expect u to officially declare lurk status, u aint worthy to be on my nuts son *gets the rest of the groupies on said nuts to chicken fight that nigga off my pubes*

edit: lmmfao...if u had the sense to realize the difference between an inbox and an email this woulda been over, ur stupidity only postpones the asswhippin, not to mention, u judgin my supposed wackness on an admittedly wack yet humorous post, folks that hated that audio praise my next 3, ya need to find a new crutch when battlin me, that shit hasnt supported ya too well

Your audios wont shit on NOBODY!!!!!!!!!!
Least of all the mighty Flash. I guess I'll just dis all you weak ass frootly loop soundcard niggas in one shot and post it so you can cry on your keyboards. I never claimed to be mr. technology so no, I dont feel stupid for mixing up emails and inboxes, actually it's good for my street cred. Ur a fuckin nerd ric. Ima shit on you, Hdub, Auriz weak, and anyone else that comes at me sideways when I know they aint even raw like that. Geek ass cats...

WTF u talkin you dont lose?

Didnt you lose to Zin? and recently you got served by Know's Alias. I remember pointing out that your verse was hot in theory, but it would never flow to any beat. I dont care about politics, your little groupie nerds, or what free soundcard sampler you use, I aint on here to make myself feel like I'm a star because I click post msg. I'm here to pass time at work, period.

You aint shit, and the more you rest on your laurels in cyberspace, the more you'll never be shit.

u lyrics are wack on or off a beat, and no i didnt lose to zin, hes who i took the crown from dickface, trust i know my record, know beat me by one vote, and im not here to dispute that but i aint come with a respectable verse, ive beaten know before, and i aint here to get props, im here to become iller than i already am, the audio thing aint a thing to me, if u dont think my flow wont work on beats, u have only half a point, cause if i wrote it to a particular beat, something i rarely do, im on point, ur just all-around mediocre, ur flow is hit or miss, mine is sick, u cant say shit to me until u post an audio that stands to half my writtens

"the audio thing aint a thing to me"

^this is the problem. What, are you gonna pass out sheets of lyrics and ask people to read them?

Go fill out a TPS report

once i get a new sound card, im straight...ive let people hear the audios me, zin and frak spit in the studio, i still gotta improve but its obvious my flow is murderous, nukka ask about me, and if u got more to say, keep the rest of the shit talk to the inbox...inbox...not email

What? Who am I supposed to ask about you? Nukka, nobody knows who you are. If asked about you, they'd ask me what the fuck I was talkin about.

...flash has been claiming we going to have an audio battle for weeks now, he's been telling me his shits is coming too

this dude has not posted one single audio

now i havent seen ric's so i cant speak to that, but when i posted up here i admitted that i was a complete novice

all i have for making beats is garageband and im just learning the ropes

same with the flow- this shit is just a hobby for me, never really done it before

im not claiming to be any great musician, just a student

still, this dude talked so much shit about my audio which at the very least was well written (which is more than i can say for 99% of his whack rhymes)
that i felt obligated to call him out to an audio battle

i had seen him post nothing but crap and he was not a person that i was going to take shit from

challenge issued, challenged accepted

weaks later many claims about how much of a thug he is, many claims about being on the sp1200 for ten years and eating beats with monstrous flows

and still i hear nothing....

i don't expect ric will either

and if anyone does at this point im sure it will be awful


yo flash-

if you that sick just lace someone elses instrumental with a quick flow right now?

nothing elaborate

do it like that


lmao

and it's been ONE week.

And you lost that other battle to me BTW, peace

...what you want, i think i slayed you

you will never post consistent hotness like i do on the regular

you will never post rhymes as hot as the hit i do for battles that are actually of any consequence to me

i killed you at half speed

but hate on- i'm not gonna look at anything else from you unless it's a link to an audio

sound hot whilst spittin a rhyme. So g'head w the nerd shit that means nothin in the real world. No really. All this shit means nothing. Why dont you explain to your hardest friends about what you do on these boards. Come back and tell me what they say.

u woulda got murked, u only mediocre

and when did this cat go plat? in the real world, u either got money or a buzz, im sure u dont have enough of neither to take ur crit seriously, plus i murked u, lol

lol. I still think your shit would sound gay out loud. It dont even flow. I think I woulda took you in a live setting. I dont have a mad homo lisp.

All I GOTTA SAY IS U CAN'T CALL NO ONE GAY YO NAME IS FLASH. AND THEN U MAKE GAY STATEMENTS LIKE U CAN'T MESS WITH THE FLASH. I'M LEILA ALI'S COUSIN. U PEE SITTING DOWN WHILE GETTING P'D. U TRIED TO RIP HIM WIT A WRITTEN AND IT DIDN'T WORK. I KNOW IT WAS A WRITTEN CAUSE IT HAD NOTHING TO DO WITH WHAT U SAID.

>So g'head w the nerd shit
>that means nothin in the real world. No really. All this
>shit means nothing. Why dont you explain to your hardest
>friends about what you do on these boards. Come back and tell
>me what they say.


first off, in saying this aren't you shitting on yourself as much as anyone else?

secondly, this proves that you have never really been involved in the street life

the most hardest people out there are the craziest and smartest. the most artistic and creative people are the ones who's lost there minds a bit and been through some shit

in fact- a disproportionate number of my friends who's involved in a hard lifestyle write rhymes and make music or are just big fans, they mos def appreciate this type of shit- you'd be surprised how hard some of the heads on here actually are- but best believe i can tell whos actually coming from a real place with it and who is just posturing

finally, i'm only out here this much cause im out in the middle of nowhere in massachusetts getting my diploma. out here me nuke and sik ARE the hardest people around

you in the city how come this is what youre doing?

9-5 til I quit at the end of the year to pursue the rap shit. It just so happens I have net access at work. I'm so gully, I dont even have the net at home. I dont know what street cats you deal with in Mass, but my niggas in the Fillmore district of SF dont give A GOTDAMN about some fuckin OK battles. When I tell them about yall, they moan and groan and thell me to stay the fuck off that shit and stop wastin my time. I would, but I pump verses out on here, and being on here is gonna help me reach my goal of 200 verses by years end.

"finally, i'm only out here this much cause im out in the middle of nowhere in massachusetts getting my diploma. out here me nuke and sik ARE the hardest people around "

^^^That dont make you hard. To be the least soft in a shop full of creampuffs does not a hard rock make. I bet some of those Abercrombie whiteboys'll fuck yall up.

and

"but best believe i can tell whos actually coming from a real place with it and who is just posturing"

OKplaya. Wow, you must have a very advanced barometer for realness out in Massachusetts. Gee dub, do you have telepathic powers? Whatever man. You bit Ric's style, but you bit mine too. Dont think I dont notice.

This is all pointless, but I'm tearing you a new one anyway. You, Rick, and anyone that thinks I aint for real.

Have a nice day.

...not the castro like your ass

im in mass getting my diploma but make no mistake up until three years ago i just did my thing in brooklyn nobody rolling around san francisco has done or seen what i've seen

i dont try to talk about thug shit tho cause it doesnt matter at all how much weight i've pushed or heads ive busted in

this is a creative exercise and to me on here all that matters is how good your verses are artistically

the fact that you are trying to turn this into a comparison of who is "harder" which can't be proven online anyways just shows that you are feeling insecure about your skills as a writer

This was pretty good too. Say... hm. The flow was real nice, yea. I think that Shakeet flowed better, Prolif had better punches... but shakeet had more....

Close, but Shakeet

Shakeet:

I've seen better from you. You started off solid. That verse would've gotten you in the second round against a lot of us, but you knew you were going up against Prolif.

Prolif:

I don't really have a single line to point out. That whole verse was just a flurry of consistent jabs and body blows. I have you picked to win it all.

This line was just f--king well done:

"cause ya' scripts so hollow, black, ya' bars start to echo/
Lif's flames spark and target through ya black market retro/"

Good shit.

Vote=Prolif

both emcee spit nice as hell, nice punchline from both,

Prolif gave more, this is one of those cases that lenght won the battle

vote - Prolif

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....and so it goes, im at it again. Fix ur fucking face, Im in the building!

This cat is nasty, he writes like he could really rhyme. I imagined how this battle would sound in person, I just couldnt see a cat with Sha's steez takin Prolif who seems like a real punchline heavy battle rapper.

...this is a really tight battle so i'm gonna walk y'all through the thought process i had on this one

shit, i'm not even 100% sure who i'm leaning towards on this one- let me break this down and see if it helps clear up my answer...

>Prolif:
>aiyo,
>check the archives, u get the worst crowd feedback/
>dude begged the admins for a 1st round rematch/

prolif started off pretty strong, i was feeling the flow in here- and for me, this string of punchlines was a pretty damn decent combo

>what u need black, is somen' to make ya' soul throttle,/
>some attention at home and maybe a role model/
>cause ya' scripts so hollow, black, ya' bars start to echo/
>Lif's flames spark and target through ya black market retro/
>u aint ghetto! u trailer park; u only hustle lies/
>thinking u finally made it now cause u own a double wide/

^^^that double wide shit was real funny

this one was pretty funny too:

>get ya' goals up, ya' lumps down, and ya' flows up!!/
>u should rap about ice the way u punked down and froze up/

but then after that i didn't feel them so much, this one didn't hit very hard for me:

>and we know wassup; - back and chest so pale/
>shook! screaming S.O.S. - dude u S.O.L.!/

and this string flowed well and was funny, but the punchlines were a bit on the generic side

ru paul jokes, rhyming "cool" and "school," ya wife said i'm the best, this is all pretty standard battle ish

>cause i specialize wit' u awed, in making crews flawed/
>u specialize in faking & imitating Ru Paul!/
>too tall on the mic for this midget in pre-school/
>hey ya'll - i'll be in round 2 in a minute, so be cool/
>had to school my pupil - give'm somen' to save/
>but please don't call him stupid cause he keep flunking the
>grade!!/
>Keets took a L on this test; got more bars than zest/
>"BZZZZ!!" ya' wife just texted me and said i'm the
>best/

continuing on this punchline was also kind of back/fact/track, it's pretty simple rhyme scheme an dsubject matter

>i would'a hit her back, but i was laughing from the fact,/
>that she said u the first emcee to never have a track/
>ya' record label called; they said, they'd never have u back/
>ya' crew emailed me dawg; they said, they never got ya' back/
>don't ever call that 'rap'! even though that's what u meant
>to/

and then after that section which was a bit weak for me prolif closed real strong with this last one- ended it on a real good note

>ya' best bet - log off for good and work on instrumentals!!/
>i'm in to burning mics wit' ease, and blowing up blocks/
>Prolific melt Keeters keys, then i thow out tha' Lok/
>

well, shakeet started off strong right here:

>Shakeet:

>I’m back at it/ the emcee automatic//
>Your styles bent outta shape like a flimsy Craftmatic//
>I spit tragic/ like babies who swallow plastic//

this is a great joke for this tourney- sickly funny, offensive and nasty to the max

>Lif never Pro enough to follow my semantics//
>My flow’s tantric/ sparkin like Buddha blunts//
>When I’m done you can’t get to Nirvana soon enough//
>I can’t be touched/ the Hebrew Ark Of The Covenant//
>Be sure when you click my post that you got on your oven
>mitt//

on first read i didn't see how this flowed but now i can see the covennant/oven mitt rhyme- the flows still a little rought here, but this is alright

>I got flavor for the masses/ from niggas to pasty bastids//
>My rhymes a healthy diet, but stacked thicker than molasses//
>I’m classic/ Sha clairvoyant, you stay with the jurassic//
>Your flow is dry and flaky, need some lyrical chapstick//

once again an alright section, this would have been ok but J5 ruined it for me, they rhyme "classic and jurassic" in what's golden- i just saw them last month so i've had their mix bumping in my ride a lot and that rhyme had kind of a "been done" feel for me

now this next one right here:

>I know you Marvel cuz I spit fire like the Human Torch//
>Lif talk a slick game, but just another monkey on the porch//

ROFLOFLROFLROFL!!!!! shit! i had to go to gibberish there cause the standard abbreviations and emoticons don't do this punchline justice. to me this is the kind of joke that is exactly what we all should be bringing to the tourney; original, sickly hilarious, wit' clever wordplay on top, and offensive as all hell on the bottom. this punchline landed really hard for me, one of the best of the first round

>So I exhort/ Put some real effort into your work//
>Peasant, keep lookin for royalty like Kool Herc//
>Shakeet’s berserk/ My lyrics gotta nympho thirst//
>I impregnate minds with science in one skeet squirt//
>Like Ernie and Bert/ you sweet like Mrs. Butterworth//
>In this rhyme arena, I got more game than Jesus
>Shuttlesworth//
>
>

and finally sha's last set of lines the impregnate minds line is nice and i really liked the jesus shuttlesworth shit att he end- you both seasoned pros by now and know to close off strong

wow, i really keep going back and forth on this. my first instinct was to go with prolif- he definitely has the edge in flow and it seemed like he was more consistent with flow and punchlines. even tho shakeet had all of my favorite lines in this he just didnt seem to be bringing the consistency

on closer examination i found shakeet's flowed better than i had initially given him credit for even tho lif still has the edge there. i also looked through lif's punches and as i pointed out they seemed to be a bit generic for me

anyways my final conclusion would really be that this was a draw with lif getting the edge in flow and shakeet getting the edge on punchlines- BUT having gotten a few draw votes myself i know that thats kind of anticlimactic

i'm gonna have to do what aus did on mine with this one and give it to shakeet by .000001 on the strength of him just basically making me laugh a little harder- this was real close tho

i also want to co-sign with whateva and say that if either of these rhymes had been up against most of the other first round stuff i've seen both these dudes would be going to round 2

FINAL VOTE: SHAKEET wins in the photo finish

another archive worth battle, didn't think Round 1 would have such good matchups, I mean yeah I expected it but wow. shit was hot though, could've gone either way, I just read prolifs and the flow was on some jadakiss type shit. I saw either of these two headin down to the finals, def had my head bangin to both of these with no beat somehow, lol. peace and good luck. I mean to whoever faces the winner in round 2.

and i went with Shakeet Lokh Em
i know fucked up right well shit it was too close. I mean pro was just cruel. Shakeet said some shit though had me rollin. Yall got me on some paula abdual shit right now....... i say yall battle again right now so i can determine

He won because he went longer not harder. It's a difference. I will see him again. If he's game that is.

*Yes I'm being bitter and a sore loser. So what! lol*

i personally think that jesus shuttlesworth line was the hottest of the first rd period, that almost had me yo, it really couldve gone either way

>Prolif: this is that good shit

>u aint ghetto! u trailer park; u only hustle lies/
>thinking u finally made it now cause u own a double wide/

>cause i specialize wit' u awed, in making crews flawed/
>u specialize in faking & imitating Ru Paul!/
>
>i would'a hit her back, but i was laughing from the fact,/
>that she said u the first emcee to never have a track/
>ya' record label called; they said, they'd never have u back/
>ya' crew emailed me dawg; they said, they never got ya' back/
>don't ever call that 'rap'! even though that's what u meant
>to/
>ya' best bet - log off for good and work on instrumentals!!/

>
>
>Shakeet:

>Be sure when you click my post that you got on your oven
>mitt//

only be cause someone else used it turned me off


good points
>I’m classic/ Sha clairvoyant, you stay with the jurassic//
>Your flow is dry and flaky, need some lyrical chapstick//

>I impregnate minds with science in one skeet squirt//
>Like Ernie and Bert/ you sweet like Mrs. Butterworth//
>In this rhyme arena, I got more game than Jesus
>Shuttlesworth//
>
>

close.. very close. good job by both.

Cadence solid...punches solid and witty....just all around tight.

Skeet...ya verse cadence as nice...but your punches weren't as sharp as Lif's. He was coming AT you on every line...so he got the nod. Nice work though.

I know, you're right. I wasn't direct enough. Next time I'll be sure to be freakin evil. But I don't care what nobody say, it was still 20 bars of fire. Forget what you heard. (Or read. lol) I still got my R.O.T.Y. belt on my shoulder.

**George Jefferson-esque walk out of the thread**

>Your styles bent outta shape like a flimsy Craftmatic//
>I spit tragic/ like babies who swallow plastic//

And evidently nobody caught this line either...
>I can’t be touched/ the Hebrew Ark Of The Covenant//
>Be sure when you click my post that you got on your oven
>mitt//

PRO fucking LIF!!!!

MiracleRic VS flashiusclay

MiracleRic:
“Shoulda been us in the finals”
Translation:
“my hands shaking”
i text foes and expose that they puss and va-ginal
my heat leaves flesh cold,
any person worth a verse in this tourney
has been handed a fresh flow, hearse and a gurney
and now they e-corpses requests that he forfeits
they all seem to sling the same text dirt
but ever since I fell neck first
I been an expert
At showing my flaws and growth
And still crush balls and throats
I make haters remove they bras and vote
For the same cat that just bruised they jaws and hopes
Of being the iller artist, I’ll paint the scene,
of villians, martyrs, and in-patient kings,
I own the elite spot,
u hungry? Continue to eat cock...chicken
me drops heatrocks written,
skeet scotch to leave ock christened
and shit dope, piss coke,
ima lyrical sick joke, an ill jest,
MiracleRic’s Pope, I still bless,
and leave the boards smelling like grilled flesh,
i spit that raw ish pimp,
like crawfish, shrimp,
and spit right bayou, u bi, why u?
lower QI...backwids, *sigh* cute, u just a bye duke,
u cant leave a vet wet with dry pukes
come on kid, u lack rhythm
consider this flow crack a baptism
in dark logic, i flood the boards with narcotics
paint the street with ya blood, and call it an art project
*board mourns*


flashiusclay:
Puerto ricans hatians blacks browns whites mulottas
Is goin down early in the first round like Golota..
Midnight Maruader usen big mics to slaughter
Well spoken con writin kites to ya mama
...She says I'm eloquent with words
Gas ya self up and you find ya self served
..I give a rats ass, nerd or a thug
I beat em witta pole and air em out like a persian rug
..Rip his heart out like a mayan priest
Flash beats shit and farts out of any guy he eats...
(he eats) anyone that queues up in the lunchline
Feelin way sick, I ate too much at one time
And I'm still hungry, you do not want it from me
I'm the star of the show, you just my understudy
Kids cannot see me, Hip Hop needs me
I'll steal a nigga bike like in Big Top PeeWee
.."Stall him out D Bo!" nah I gotta crush his ego
Tears holes up in his Sears Roebuck tuxedo...
Cold blood sub sero you know Flash is lethal
I'm several levels better than them other cats that beat you
Write my ass off and charge it to the game
It's gonna take a lot more than the first part of ya name...

game over

I lost.

Audio's comin Moday morn.

ya'll punched but no direct blows, i wanted to see somebody get called out. with that said, ric's punches were harder. Based on what I'd seen in previous battles from Flash i expected a lot more. to me this was supposed to be the 2nd best battle of the first round, but the prolif vs. shakeet battle was iller.

MiracleRic:
what can i say u dont your thang doggie!

Flashiuclay:
u a unnecesary cocky dude, but sometimes thats needed, like right now
i didnt see that same cockyness i that i expected from u

Vote - MircaleRic




....and so it goes, im at it again. Fix ur fucking face, Im in the building!

Ric takes it. He wanted it more. Flash don't take this the wrong way, but your verse came off as you bein scared man. A love tap. You been blastin the board, downin homes, and I'm thinkin you gonna come with somethin raw. That ish was huff. The Sears Roeuck line was good, but the rest was average. If you gonna be cocky like that, back your claim up. I've already lost today, so believe, I ain't hatin. I'm just callin it as it is.

Vote: Miracle Ric

GODD DAME, GOOD BYE SON!

MiracleRic:
"any person worth a verse in this tourney
has been handed a fresh flow, hearse and a gurney
and now they e-corpses requests that he forfeits"

superb

"in dark logic, i flood the boards with narcotics
paint the street with ya blood, and call it an art project"

strong ending

flashiusclay:
"Write my @ss off and charge it to the game
It's gonna take a lot more than the first part of ya name..."

strongest line

MiracleRic had more blows...i thought both ya'll cats should have attacked the other a lil' more though

vote: MiracleRic


"duck cause i struck with the soul of motown/my central broadcasting systems is low down" -- gza

....so nobody can accuse me of hating

seems like ric don't need my vote anyways tho lol

shakeet and aus saw this pretty much the same as i did so peep their comments if you want some feedback

damn joined about a month ago, never saw ric like this, flash had some good shit in there but ric was fired up. my e-corpse votes for ric. pyeace

His rhyme scheme and punches were just more polished.

on the real ric won it but only cause mofo's was expecting that shit ya'll was doing in the lobby to show up inside .... ric brougth some of that shit from the lobby ...if flash had brought it too ....it would have been lights out for you ric ...on the strength of the sears and robuck tux line alone!!!!!! ric he exposed you a lil bit ....but in the end you got him ...


RIC

by saying the same shit every single person that battles me says, come on yo, i admit that part flowed nicely and it was a nice punch, but who hasnt had a punch at my avy, and everytime it happens i shit on folks, come on yo...ya need to come original, if anyone got exposed, its him for two reasons

1. after all that shit talk about dirt, he aint get a vote

2. i called him out for being shook, put it into the verse, and not only his original statement, but his verse did nothing but validate my claim, that was the most personal punch in the whole joint, but either way, i backed my shit up

i woulda won if my verse was just this

"“Shoulda been us in the finals”
Translation:
“my hands shaking”
i text foes and expose that they puss and va-ginal
my heat leaves flesh cold,
any person worth a verse in this tourney
has been handed a fresh flow, hearse and a gurney
and now they e-corpses requests that he forfeits
they all seem to sling the same text dirt
but ever since I fell neck first
I been an expert
At showing my flaws and growth
And still crush balls and throats
I make haters remove they bras and vote
For the same cat that just bruised they jaws and hopes"

I wasn't feelin either over the other... but Ric punched more, but both weren't really direct.

Tho... I did like Flash's style as a whole...

so...

erm...

Cuz the just lil bit more intensity, say Ric.

And dam I'm tired.

Ric had a few deep punches mixed in a lotta dribble (art project line was a jaw-dropper).
flash only had the killer last line

this tourney's gonna be a lot tougher than the last Ric.. step it up.
____________________________________________________________

A wise man sees failure as progress,
a fool divorces his knowledge and misses the logic
(c) canibus - poet laureate 2

A body slept on that... Iono, have niggas said that shit before? That would kill it on a mixtape

but it wasnt scorching

ur best joint was the end

Ric's verse started off slow...built up steam, and there were solid lines...but it didn't have the "OH SHIT!" and seamless flow that Flashiusclay's verse did.

Flash...very solid from front to back...you played with ya sounds in the verse type nice and it was nice to see a battle that didn't rely on "fag calling". Good work.

so...fuckit if I stand alone...Flash gets my vote.

nice.

and to all competitors, my bad for poppin all types of shit and cluttering up the thread with BS. I really aint that cocky in person. I also wanna say really aint mad at rick, I just think he cant rap out in the world. Which irritates me as a real emcee. Rick, prove me wrong, I never heard the audios where you didn't suck. And not to make excuses, I wrote that verse at the very last second, for once I had to do some work at the JO... That's why that verse was not put together very well, I had been thinkin of the punches, but I didn't sew em together right. I deserved to lose.

BUT!!!!

Monday morning I will have revenge and redemption..

This I pledge.

what audios you've actually heard. If you are talking inagural audios, I concur....Ric sucked ass!!!!

With that said he is now light years above that, imho. here is some ish from earlier this year.

I'm type anxious to hear your audios playa.


http://www.soundclick.com/freestyleboardmix

Niggas is MUCH (much much much) weaker than I thought. Rick, if that's your idea of a flow... LMAMFAO!!!!! Garbage. For reals. Garbage. I dont know why you think niggas is as wack like you. You need to holla at the dentist, (OR SOMEBODY DAWG HAHAHAHAHAHAH) that lisp is NOT G Rap esque.


LMMFAO all day long!!!!

Pour some hot sauce on these nuts!!!

wild super homo ass girl niggas...

edit: Hey man. Check it out. When you rhyme to a beat, use the tempo and percussion to guide ya flow. Dont just talk while the beat plays. You do not know how to rap. LMAAAAAAAASSSSSO

wow.

i'm real anxious to hear audios now. most definitely tuning in monday. gotsta hear what you're quitting the 9-5 for. i hope you sound as dope as some of your previous verses have been (hold this tourney verse). don't really know what you checked in particular (couldnt have been much in 15 minutes), but can you offer more concise criticism than "yo lisp is whack"?

My main gripe with most of the "keystyle" cats, particularly Hdub and Ric, is that they do not use the beat to their advantage. The beat simply plays in the back while they sloppily recite a verse that doesn't seem to have anything to do with the beat.

Ric has these solid rhyme schemes, but they way he formats his rhymes to a beat is just unpolished. His flow? What flow? That shit is just garbage. He has no personality on the mic, he has no force, he sounds like the billions of amateur rappers that you can find around Earth. I dont know where to begin. You know how you listen to a song and you can tell within the first 30 seconds and its a banga or not? Well, when I heard your boy, the precise second he started "spittin" (I use the term spit loosely, that was not spittin)
I knew it was a lost cause.

I'm almost 25 years old, and I been rhymin since 15. By the time I was 18 I knew how to write to a beat, and format a verse to a beat, and since I first started I could rhyme to the beat. Dub and Ric write all types of rhymes, and if I spit em, or someone with a rudimentary overstanding of flow spit em, they might be kinda hot.
But these two hacks cannot rhyme to beat. I have experience in this, and I am a good teacher and talent scout. I wouldnt waste my time with these two toys.

Any skilled rapper knows how to ride a beat, I didnt hear a true skilled rapper on none of these clips, and I'm still listening. No disrespect to the other emcees, yall aint the ones sayin I couldnt rap in real life. I aint got no problems with the other fellers so I'll be nice and direct my criticism to those who stepped on my toes.

Hdubs audio is floating around, that shit was even many times weaker than ric's stuf if that is possible. Hdub has no business anywhere near any kind of recording device or microphone unless he's the engineer. Hdub, you have no future in hip hop music. Period.

I gotta say I feel kind of stupid getting in thses petty arguments with these horrible toys, but how can I let cats this weak pop shit at me? I maintain I'm a real emcee and I've never met a person I couldnt outspit in a cypher or battle. I've lost some battles in an organized setting, (thats a whole nother but Ive yet to meet anyone (outside of my ace boon and that was once) who has ever spit hotter than me. I've been in massive cyphers where niggas is spittin their heart out, bustin all their writtens, and I come off the head and destroy (True story) with patterns, punches, stamina, style, finesse, zest, and zeal. And I write. And I make beats, and I dig for breaks, and I schooled niggas on SP-1200s and MPCs and ASRs, and I taught myself how to do all that shit.

I aint the toy here. But if you dont believe me, hold onto your cheeks til Monday. I'm bout to Nagasaki this board.

edit: oh yeah. dub, you lost that match betwixt us. Go back and tally the votes

ok.

i respect the fact you broke it down. respect. but i must retort that the only one that i hear that he really doesn't ride the beat is the freestyle one. i will give you the gripe that he didnt write to these beats. I am a dictator in the booth so i just tell dudes to get in there and rhyme. with that said how i just dont hear the same thing as you. he was on beat and he had swag. you say you came up on all the real emcees (tip, rakim, etc.), hopefully you bring this in your audio as opposed to some pop rapper (ie 50, camron, insert your favorite top 40 rapper here). furthermore my interest is piqued on your beat making skills since "you dig" and so forth. as far as the other dudes, my man frak gets off, yukon gets off, and as much as i'd hate to say it that clown zin gets off (get off ya own dick bitch before you get an ever bigger head). i can't front it's a lot of dudes on these boards who write ill verses that i could take to the booth and murder, and i rhyme every 3 years or so. that said, i feel your gripe that it is something that you just have. some have to grow into it, some just have that natural bragaddocio. eagerly anticipating the latter from you. anything else would be a let down.

ICU kid. trust me I aint on some fiddy or ching a ling. trust me

I gotta say I'm not using one of my beats though, I think it would be a waste. I am gonna use a real dope beat that a body loves and is familiar with. But I didn't make the beat. BTW, did you make that Milky shit?

all beats on any soundclick i throw up are done by yours truly bka "HOT" S.A.U.S.E. check the sig fo mo.

....you keep going on and on about how you use the sp1200 and the mpc and now we find that you claim to have learned personally from rakim, kool g rap, and mf doom

bitch please, if you were EVEN REMOTELY that hot you wouldnt be on here

i am officially ignoring everything you say unitl you ACTUALLLY post and audio

if you were HALF as hot as you say you would just do a 20 second freestyle and send it out and without writing or a fancy mic we'd see your skills

you say you are going to the studio on saturday? if i don't see audio on monday i am never even giving any remote attention to anything you say on this board

>Hdubs audio is floating around, that shit was even many times
>weaker than ric's stuf if that is possible. Hdub has no
>business anywhere near any kind of recording device or
>microphone unless he's the engineer. Hdub, you have no future
>in hip hop music. Period.

for the last time- that audio was my first attempt ever

i have admitted it was whack

unlike you and other cats on here who say this is your life i am just doing this as a hobby i'm an english major and im gonna be a journalist one day so i have sick skills with the written word- but as of now my flow is admittedly whack

that being said i did post an audio however bad it was- you havent posted a god damned thing

also

i accepted your challlenge of doing an audio battle (this was like 2 weeks ago) and havent heard shit from you

once again i say- if im so whack and you so nice then WHERE THE FUCK YOU AT?!?!

me and my shitty beginner flow are ready to go

finally in reference to this:

>edit: oh yeah. dub, you lost that match betwixt us. Go back
>and tally the votes

this is nothing new the tally hasnt changed and i still say i didnt lose

tallies dont mean shit to me unless i know it was relatively close- like here with dvs or my battle with ric

so much bull be going on here on this site that you have to learn to take the totals with a grain of salt- i think technically i took an L against flipp dogg as well

i slayed you in written- to make it worse i was blatanly going easy on you and just warming up for the tourney

your flow may be better than mine when we do the audio but there is no doubt in my mind that my shit will be better written

You give yourself entirely too much credit. This is the type a shit that pisses me off. I was going easy on you. I turned the heat up 9th inning, that's why I won. and I meant I studied Ra and G and em. Of course they didn't personally school me. I'm done debating. I'm saving all my heat for Saturday. I would drop a quick one, but I dont have soundcards and computers and shit, I have to go to a studio for that. You should be happy though, you can enjoy your last days.

cats who are remotely that hot "post here".

?uest site is visited by a gang of folks on a regular including cats who already have deals who are in the league of the folks mentioned above. so that statement is mute man.

I liked them. For whatever my opinions worth. I didn't hear any noticeable lisp on Rics part. He flowed well and rode with the beat. And before anybody gets ignorant and opens their mouth, I am as unbiased as you can get. I don't have any affiliations or alignments. Would it be somethin I would buy? Maybe. It could stand to be mastered more, but that's neither here nor there. Cuz I don't have a mic, much less an audio. lol

*And I know I'm not the first person to say that dude before Ric sound like Capone. I CAN'T be the first.*

you are entitled.

Me, I am a harsh critic, 1, because I'm a real emcee and dont come around my gate talkin that weak shit when you aint really about it. Dub and Ric hold zero weight on the mic.

2, I learned at the feet of Rakim, Kane, G, Tip, MOP, DOOM, Wu etc etc etc what it means to be an emcee, and I dont fuckin take it lightly. I hold myself to the standards that the above set, not some internet 7th grade intramural shit. I got mics, I got equipment (no recording box tho) so my perspective that I view this shit from is different from yours. You was really feelin that tho? At least somebody does.

We're supposed to build. I don't hate on anybody here, even if they're God-awful. At least they're trying. I ain't sayin lie to them and say they have the King Midas touch, but don't try to rip a hole in them either. You never know how an artist is gonna turn out. Common sound way diffrent from his first album. He evolved and that's why he is the monster that he is. I didn't say their joints was classic or anything. It was pretty good. I mean what can we expect? Really? As far as I know, NOBODY on this board has a deal with a major, and access to REAL industry standard recording equipment. Studios are over the place, with 'top of the line equipment', but it takes more than that to make a good record. It has to be produced to death and then mastered. Who is gonna go through all that just for an internet forum where cats is gonna hate on them anyway? They did a good job with what they had. We need more buildin man, we get enough hatin in the real world. ~one~

.

but to call my flow garbage is hate...i personally wouldnt buy the verses off those audios exept the spit it for joint, but i think its way better then my very first, another thing is, i spit old verses not written to beats or written with no beats and tried and to force them to the beat, i think i did an ok job, but i when i get a new soundcard, i'll do nothin but beatjacks to polish that up, i dont mind the hate or the criticsm, id be the first to label myself a writer first, and an MC 2nd, im a perfectionist, but i still think my flow is better than urs, and a lot of people agree, but id like to see the audio, if ur sick, i'll have more respect for ya

No it's not hate. It's callin a spade a spade. It may appear I was overly harsh, but I'm really like that. In my eyes, that shit was trash can garbage. To say you flow better than me is an ignorant statement, and a foolish one at that. You were sayin shit like I couldnt outspit your warmups, I'm weak, I'm scared of you. You are what you accused me of. And for that I'm gonna smear you. Let these other cats hold your hand and give you encouragement, I'm gonna give you the real and destroy you utterly, you'll learn a lot more and come up a lot faster this way. It's all Mathematics anyway.

oh well, i guess, i better break out the standard ABAB punchline steez for next round

you slayed me with written word. I'm goin to the lab on Sat though for all you muggies who think I cant hold it down on the MI. We'll see who slays who when it really counts.

if u cant see the flow on my shit, ur just as basic as i thought u were, i think i prooved u were shook, but whatever, only one e-corpse decided against me

YA CANT SEE FLOW!!!

FLOW ISNT SOMETHING THAT YOU CAN LOOK AT.

dumbass

i can see flow

doesnt mean the MC can effectively showcase the flow, but i can see flow, by reading it, and the point is, ur verse wasnt hot, so spit that audio and i guarantee people arent gonna feel ur presecne added that much more to it

but you cant really flow

Answer me that.

only u think that, poetry has flow to it, if ur too dense to see it and seem to be one of the only, whatever, and as far as people "holding my hand" fuck u, half the cats that have attested to my growth/flow are my harshest critics, ask zin, u didnt have shit to say until i called u out for being shook, u obviously had reason to be, nuff said, im done with the topic

I dont care if a bunch of cats w/o flows is telling you your wack flow got better. I'm telling you, your shit is still wack. Deaf niggas would say you couldnt flow. And I aint askin Zin shit, YTF I gotta ask Zin about you when I know your trash and I always have known this? Lots of people can write rhymes, very few can spit em. You are in the first category, but not ever will you be true spitter. I so aint shook off your queer lispy flow dog...

>only u think that,

Only him? Dude.....come on now.

give me more credit than that.

When I criticize, even cats I've beefed with...I'm pretty unbiased and I cite my reasons.

Don't dumb it down for my account.

nah, not just you, i know u stay unbiased, it aint really dumbin it down, its refocusing on a diff aspect of ill

but when i originally wrote this verse i had the bitter beer face for a minute, some cats think it was as i hot as i did and others thought it was a B- for me, and the main beef i got was that i didnt attack him enough, i disagree, but i think standard punchlines get more notice as clever slick swag shit

Gol-lee! Who you supposed to hurt with that shit? All your talk about flow, swagger, fly lines, internal rhymes schemes are rendered irrelavant with your weak ass bootleg rap steez. There's a reason why the cutting room has a floor.

>Gol-lee! Who you supposed to hurt with that shit? All your
>talk about flow, swagger, fly lines, internal rhymes schemes
>are rendered irrelavant with your weak ass bootleg rap steez.
>There's a reason why the cutting room has a floor.


All I have to say is if u grew up on Wu sometimes them niggas lived off beat. Next nigga if u real rapper and in the booth as much u say u know how to count sylables and how to feel what a nigga flow is. To Resplit or really break down. We all heard them same CD's u weren't in the booth wit them niggas so don't act like its more or better. Cause honestly the MC's of today may not be better than back then but the beats are. And sometimes u get critical of people and u ain't that tight. Yo lyrics ain't special. Yo thought pattern ain't special. U just naming names. Cause if u listen to them niggas yo lyrics wouldn't be spit the way they are u might spit on cash type shit but it'll have some meaning to it yo shit surface.

so i advance by dq? that isnt cool

Momma named him clay....I'm a call him clay.

I voted for Clay here's why.


The whole rhyme up until this part...

*u bi, why u?
lower QI...backwids, *sigh* cute, u just a bye duke,
u cant leave a vet wet with dry pukes
come on kid, u lack rhythm
consider this flow crack a baptism
in dark logic, i flood the boards with narcotics
paint the street with ya blood, and call it an art project
*board mourns*

Was about you. That aint good. Stick with the subject at hand. Your opponent. Saying this cat is saying the same shit others have said about you is wrong cause.....these lines here...



*Puerto ricans hatians blacks browns whites mulottas
Is goin down early in the first round like Golota..*

HARD!!!



*..I give a rats ass, nerd or a thug
I beat em witta pole and air em out like a persian rug*

Word!!!


*Kids cannot see me, Hip Hop needs me
I'll steal a nigga bike like in Big Top PeeWee*

I spit out my soda on this one

and then it just kept coming

*.."Stall him out D Bo!" nah I gotta crush his ego
Tears holes up in his Sears Roebuck tuxedo...
Cold blood sub sero you know Flash is lethal
I'm several levels better than them other cats that beat you*

He kinda flipped back on you referencing past cats you faced

*Write my ass off and charge it to the game
It's gonna take a lot more than the first part of ya name...*

Nice ending.....

were lines I don't recall folks saying about you. And if they were...the way he's saying em is quite clever.

Clay all the way on this.

>The whole rhyme up until this part...
>
>*u bi, why u?
>lower QI...backwids, *sigh* cute, u just a bye duke,
>u cant leave a vet wet with dry pukes
>come on kid, u lack rhythm
>consider this flow crack a baptism
>in dark logic, i flood the boards with narcotics
>paint the street with ya blood, and call it an art project
>*board mourns*
>
>Was about you. That aint good. Stick with the subject at
>hand. Your opponent. Saying this cat is saying the same shit
>others have said about you is wrong cause.....these lines
>here...
>

just wow, the first four lines were all about him, what are u smoking?

"“Shoulda been us in the finals”
Translation:
“my hands shaking”
i text foes and expose that they puss and va-ginal"

im the one battling so i generally like to describe the effect i have on wack cats, me talking about past e-corpses is a punch, i expected the majority of cats that lost to me to catch feelings with this b/c not only did i dismiss him, i shitted on ya too, ya being cats ive beaten before,my focus was outwitting, outflowing, and outswaggin my opponent, not learning his life story and dissing but whatever

>*Puerto ricans hatians blacks browns whites mulottas
>Is goin down early in the first round like Golota..*
>
>HARD!!!

explain how this is hard, what do different races have to do with me, in fact, how is this a relevant punch, there is only one round, this was obviously filler, first line filler at that

>*..I give a rats ass, nerd or a thug
>I beat em witta pole and air em out like a persian rug*
>
>Word!!!

this woulda been hot if i never said something exactly like this

>*Kids cannot see me, Hip Hop needs me
>I'll steal a nigga bike like in Big Top PeeWee*
>
>I spit out my soda on this one

lmao, i have the same complaint about this line as the last one, i battled hdub and spit an ill PeeWee line similar yet iller

>and then it just kept coming
>
>*.."Stall him out D Bo!" nah I gotta crush his ego
>Tears holes up in his Sears Roebuck tuxedo...
>Cold blood sub sero you know Flash is lethal
>I'm several levels better than them other cats that beat you*
>
>He kinda flipped back on you referencing past cats you faced
>
i liked this part, but funny u forgot to mention the fact that he in fact said the same thing everyone has said about me, in fact, u and dvs tried to go at the avy(among many others), see how often that route gets votes?

>*Write my ass off and charge it to the game
>It's gonna take a lot more than the first part of ya name...*
>
>Nice ending.....
>
>were lines I don't recall folks saying about you. And if they
>were...the way he's saying em is quite clever.
>

i thought it woulda been a hot line if it wasnt a slight variation of the norm, but it was a more clever version i admit, but how many cats say its gonna take a miracle for miracle to beat them, bias is a lovely thing

>Clay all the way on this.

even clay disagrees with you, let alone the consensus, but i respect ya vote, i cant act like bias has NEVER played a part in my opinions, but i find it funny that two omni cats, the only one of u i havent beaten at least once was warlock (technically speaking), and zin wasnt feelin my verse either, but i dont think he took to well to the "past battlers" references either, but what do i know, im too full of myself to see my weaknesses

When's the second round?

probably monday, we have a lot of weekday users, so im guessing, he'll tally up and create the new match ups by monday

...so everybody who was on the list got dq'ed?

Dang, I wanted to see another battle. How many people actually got DQ'ed? It's gotta be at least 4.

makes me sad

cheer up

ThaAnthology was DQ'ed
Here is Nukes verse:
The tornament is on and nuke is dropping the bomb/
Im 8 dukes strong, a don running up against pawns/
Tornmenting this lyricist with a spiritual song/
A ridiculouse right fighting this ridiculouse wrong/
Your pistol is drawn but your aim is terribly off/
Im a lyrical boss iller than a syphilis cough/
You spit soft, floss faker than Greek Methology/
I see your weak speech like scholars reading through Anthologies/
Dominate technology this clowns round ain't stopping me/
battling me is only going to bring your mockery/
I'll strong arm this opponents arms he ain't harming me/
popping off lyrical arrows piercing through his armor steez/
Robbery.../
Is probably gonna topple his atrocities/
He'll need a bibliography to cite all his hypocracy/
I'll give lyrical sodomy to hoes that try to follow me/
I cum to bust lyrical brains its hard to swallow me/
N.F.O's is on the scene flowing skills of steel/
foes toast when they approach mental steez I spill/
Enemy be still/
My paragraphs freez at ease than proceed to kill/
Your bleeding skill fleeing from my opposition/
Nuke got mad and blew up your proposition/
Drop with wisdom, spot you on your block with wisdom of glock percision and pop shots of rock collisions/
I got this victim and I don't have no props to give him/
Writtens bitching like they're itching for some cock up in them/
Im often ripping while your mics are softly spitting/
you lost your mission and now I floss the boss description/
Compositions toss your rhythm like base in the kitchen/
Bass head addiction flipping like theres crack up in him/
You lack religion, nasty like an ass thats shitting/
Pass through your system like I was a fast prescription/
Your finding out that brother Nuke gives the business/
Divide this competition faster than a methematician/
Fast to rip him/
Split rhythm with massive friction/
Pros Listen while this victim drops his wrath of fiction/
Your style will stay missing me cause you ain't solving me/
fuck an anthology you should probably write an apology/
for battling me I'll put you under the ground with a frown/
Dispurse of his verse put him in a hearst for the round./

BarTek was DQ'ed
Here was MCee's verse:
Bartek jus stepped inta da wrong meat market,
Wrong target fa dis arsenist ta burn, regardless,
You lack ill rap like P Diddy's artists,
Iss mini me ta Shaq, don't get it twisted like da mob did,
Iss no contest, i'm hotter by da largest margine,
Armor anna shield couldn't fend you from my pen's offense,
Ya garbage, my bars abuse dudes like you,
Why you spit? I'm tryna solve dat mystery like Scooby Doo,
I guess you similar ta Keys, you got niggas sayin boo,
Maybe Mike Jones too, say ya name, dey like who?
Bartek? Who dat? Homie think dat he could rap?
Put ya pen down dog, an emcee, you ain't dat,
Off my track, off my scale, so, you could call me fat,
Crush you like Big Pun wit da flow, matta fact,
Da mic crushed in my grasp son, brush up on ya act, peace

mzwilliams was DQ'ed
Biohazard's verse:
Oh snap! First round I'm battlin' a female
But the gender don't matter, you know I'll prevail
'Cause your words are a train I'm 'bout to derail
After this is over, they'll be sayin' "She failed"
When I pick up the mic, you'd best start runnin' Mz. Williams
Your chances of winnin' are one in a million
My rhymes are 10 on the richter scale to tumble your building
They'll turn you around and leave your lunch on the ceiling
I got those solstice rhymes: They'll cut your day short
You can't ball this caliber on the main court
You're headed for the loser's seat, better change course
I'm just Biohazard, need I say more?
Okay mzwilliams, now it's time to listen
Close your damn mouth full of weak ass rhymes you're spittin'
This tourney needs more people, I'm glad you're tryin' to pitch in
But when comes to victory here, mine was written

ToeJam was DQ'ed
southernboy_423 verse:
Im a verbal uni-bomba eating emcees like jeffory Doma/
A animal crazed like Hannibal a cannibal when I up on ya/
Startin wars like im osama make buildings on blocks crumble/
Spit thick like syrup and discipline kids but I aint-cha-momma/
And I lack those intolerant/
Dude don’t like cheese and beef,
He a vegetarian who’s lactose intolerant/
U reach but Im hard to get to, I get chu when I start to reach/
Start and I spark wit heat try reach and I slurr a speech/
I bang cats like a blood or crip bang a blood or a blood to a crip/
You aint hard better guard ya lip play hard and I start to trip/
His hands up wit no gun or a knife/
He better off getting on tracks just to run for his life/
This easy boy believe me boy/
I raised hell like teens playing wit weegie boards/
Im hyped and its ill u can write what u feel/
Fuc a battle verse u better off writing ya will/
Round one over “KNOWONE CALL WHO NEXT!”/
U couldn’t call round two dialing 1-800 Collet/

n/m

TRIQUENO was DQ'ed
def1's verse:
Im letting the thunder just fly under the sky
I dont know much about you and Im wondering why
probably cause like the host of the battle you're no one
have you fall through the dirt like erosion
Im chosen to open you up and leave you frozen
cause thats how well I spit free's try to rip me
bitch please I got sick genes
like my pants had a cold trap you in catacombs
I shatter domes my rap is way fatter bro
you think you're sick I'll give you you're antidote
all you need is a placebo to get rid of you
Im hitting you with verbs ready to finish you
diminish you then replinish you
just to do it again, you and the pen
dont match cause you're watered down
dont fuck with me i'll burn you're ears with my hotter sound
my raps obese cause i trap mcees when I took action b
triqueno ran but i swallowed him like a daquiri
Im actually spitting factually cause it was a tragedy
befoe this even started and now he's mad at me
cause this battle see... is out of his league
in fact he's 20,000 leagues under me like he was jules verne
I'm taking over the tourny just wait you're turn
I'll make you burn
you're mistaking you're weakness for sickness
this battles like paper thats how easy I ripped this
you aint my employee so stay the fuck out my business

>ThaAnthology VS nuke
ThaAnth = DQ
nuke continues...

>DVS VS hdub
DVS = 5 votes hdub = 6 votes
hdub continues....

>MiracleRic VS flashiusclay
MiracleRic = 10 votes VS flashiusclay = 2 votes
MiracleRic continues....


>BarTek VS MCee
BarTek was DQ'ed
MCee continues....

>Biohazard VS mzwilliams
mzwilliams was DQ'ed
Biohazard continues......

>Zin VS FrontLIne
Zin = 13 votes vs FrontLIne = 1 vote
Zin continues....

>Prolif VS Shakeet Lokh Em
Prolif = 10 votes VS Shakeet = 3 votes
Prolif continues....

>Rajeniro757 VS Auriz Deep
Rajeniro = 12 votes VS Auriz = 1 vote
Rajeniro continues....

>sikstyle VS Whateva
Sikstyle = 8 votes VS Whateva = 11 votes
Whateva continues....

>southernboy_423 VS ToeJam
ToeJam was DQ'ed
southernboy_423 continues.....

>jayare214 VS McHanson
Double DQ!

>def1 VS TRIQUENO
TRIQUENO was DQ'ed
def1 continues

not to split hairs but i had that 7-5 on my count


good match dvs

and know- thanks for putting so much time into this

seeing all these posts today i can tell this tourney brings a lot of work

Because of DQ's we are one person short for round 2. Any one care to throw their hat into the ring?

since our loss margins were the closest out of all the battlers...

But that's just me...y'all work it out.

let's go odds and evens!! I'm odds.
*throws out a one*

but for real, I'm down for anything, should prob give it to some one new, but if people need me I won't say no, maybe have a losers bracket but that would take way too long. lemme know, peace

i say we give someone a random bye

this is gonna seem heartless but i dont think we should let anybody new in or anybody with an L back in cause it's taking long enough as it is

or if we do let somebody in you just pick it now (knowone) out of shakeet, dvs, and sik- the ones people said had real close battles and frak who threw his hat in the ring

if you just pick somebody thats cool, you the host after all so you can do what- but if we do a poll or keep talking about it it's just needless time spent

dont wanna be accused of showing favortisim over the other 2. SO I think I'll let Frak get in.....