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14504, RE: my honest opinion?
Posted by BarTek, Tue May-10-05 02:36 AM
ric ate you. i've never seen him blaze like that before. that zin and 3rd fuckin line, pure genius right there. peace


~
he stood there,
eyes locked on her,
stare irreversible.
her hands over mouth,
she laughs. he smells
her soul,
tames his thoughts,
and hides the want.
- the perfect mistake