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14497, RE: round one
Posted by hunuh, Tue May-10-05 09:57 AM

>dont give a fuck about ric's rhymes, dimes, and other two bit
>cares
>you're nothing to me ric! just one of zin's pubic hairs


>i been blessing, this board with straight hotness for weeks
>now i'll shit on your rep till ya miracle reeks
>this miracle's weak, i got stronger foundations
>my flows technically sound like cars built by asians
>it takes a nation- of millions to hold me back
>im ill like flavor flav in the days before crack
>stand back, cause you know how vicious my attacks is
>blitzkrieged zin and ric, now the next bitch is access.....
>

you finished strong

but the lines i cut are the only ones im really feeling.

idk, your stuff is solid but technically its kinda basic, no knock on you by any means, just different strokes you know.
i think your punches could be alot stronger if you stayed away from just making every word at the end of a bar rhyme and dropped some internal rhymes to speed the flow up, because its not that your shit is bad, i just get bored when im reading it because it doesn't flow super smooth.

regardless you finished that one up strong.

i was diggin the last eight bars alot.


>
> MiracleRic:
>
> "a first round hearse found ;-)" 
>
>          

>u spit off-balance/ soft ballads,
>i spit tounge in cheek,…u…toss salads…
>u all phallic, my raw palette,
>is equipped with spectrums,
>u couldn’t drop hot shit, if u spit from rectums,

lmfao.

>u toads, im sick like I lick infections
>while u pose, and win battles thru loopholes
>I poop foes, into porcelain caskets,
>Nuke’s froze, I teach courses and classes
>On how to spit dope, and export to the masses,
>Of course it’s a classic, Now that’s flow fellas,
>I’ll kick with so much force in ya asses,
>you’ll have a toe fetish
>im the new vet, and u leapt, a lil too froggy,
>u? threat? .... new hobby!

sick.

>my battlecry’s vicious, u even whine lame,
>“Ric wont spit within my timeframe”
>i silence cats, i push u vaginas back
>with my balance act, talk shit,
>did violence crack when he spat,
>do calc, u alf, "got any cats?"
>

finished strong too

i give round one to ric.