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13546, love Poem?
Posted by Sage, Tue Feb-17-04 06:15 AM
Its been a while but i just got back from travelling again and on seeing delricas post i can only say i had one of these lying around somewhere and i feel i have to post on this tread by the way everyone else's pieces are slammin... So here goes the immaginativley titled



this is not a love Poem.


Let me approach you back to front.
To oppose the conventional.


We cremated now we call,
a finished relationship broken and mauled.
Eloquence in the deceit left me paging desire.
Truth being the lasting stance,
the need was not required.
Turning and change, makes longing pain.
A triumph of “ who shall be the victor”
and have no need for stones to be cast.
In waking moments the pain is still alive,
The shrill calling of a hurt rearing in the distance,
constantly laughs.


An immortal phrase
“you won’t get a second blow at the candle” !!!!


The chided growth of an inarticulate feeling.
I felt you !!
“ could this be the one “??
“ for me to share my soul with “!!
The bejeweled oath of a breeding.
I knew this,
“ I would move the world for you “!!
“ I have opened up to you “ ??
still Is the unrequited loving of a passion held in my solace
calm is the major effect that would have come to place,
now every emotion is tainted with a but………..?!?!?


“ Scalded and scared is the man,
who does not know he has been burned .“


I loved the music, the words. The feelings of compassion.
The unrequited care and the potent emotion.
I still love the presence of your essence,
but ………..!!!!! I know enough to delete all the inanity.
It hurts though !!!!
this is not a love poem ,
I can see clearly enough to make you feel …………………


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