13546, love Poem? Posted by Sage, Tue Feb-17-04 06:15 AM
Its been a while but i just got back from travelling again and on seeing delricas post i can only say i had one of these lying around somewhere and i feel i have to post on this tread by the way everyone else's pieces are slammin... So here goes the immaginativley titled
this is not a love Poem.
Let me approach you back to front. To oppose the conventional.
We cremated now we call, a finished relationship broken and mauled. Eloquence in the deceit left me paging desire. Truth being the lasting stance, the need was not required. Turning and change, makes longing pain. A triumph of who shall be the victor and have no need for stones to be cast. In waking moments the pain is still alive, The shrill calling of a hurt rearing in the distance, constantly laughs.
An immortal phrase you wont get a second blow at the candle !!!!
The chided growth of an inarticulate feeling. I felt you !! could this be the one ?? for me to share my soul with !! The bejeweled oath of a breeding. I knew this, I would move the world for you !! I have opened up to you ?? still Is the unrequited loving of a passion held in my solace calm is the major effect that would have come to place, now every emotion is tainted with a but
..?!?!?
Scalded and scared is the man, who does not know he has been burned .
I loved the music, the words. The feelings of compassion. The unrequited care and the potent emotion. I still love the presence of your essence, but
..!!!!! I know enough to delete all the inanity. It hurts though !!!! this is not a love poem , I can see clearly enough to make you feel
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