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Topic subjectRE: Half-Hearted
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13534, RE: Half-Hearted
Posted by My Pretty Eyez, Thu Feb-12-04 03:51 PM
Dam Dam Dam... this was a tight piece. I love the flow and it just rolled up in my brain... nice drop. I can read the pain in this and it takes me right to the thick of it. My favorite was this right here:

Sad isn’t it? I entered this game thinking I was one up
Played the game of spades and watched as hearts in hand got cut up
Watched you turn the tricks, constantly claiming you’re not earning chips
Telling me you need this, chick, you better strip for that furniture
I heard you service men, letting them indent your cervix in
My first best friend told me you can even fit a person in
Yes, I’m hurting here, and angry but the pain doesn’t come out right
Should’ve listened to my mother…
Can’t turn you into a housewife…