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13521, yo, i'm done.
Posted by mindful, Tue Feb-03-04 05:21 PM
and you killed the ending too...
she just as suddenly realizes that she can't do a damn thing about it
and resigns herself to a fate on a plate
'cause maybe filling someone else's belly isn't such a bad thing.
i might actually co-sign that notion
if i wasn't so effin tired of going hungry myself.
*sighs*...
once again... why don't u post more? really... no, seriously... i haven't gotten a poem in the mail in like a week or so... i need new substance.... lol... Peace man.
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If there's a to
read, but it hasn't been written yet,
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