>first off, i really enjoyed the way you set this up, then
>mentally took my hand to show me the story rather than just
>simply telling it. (i hope that makes sense.)
>
>secondly, i think you should have called her samSara (the
>whole cycle of rebirth and death as well as the belief that
>we are stuck in this, at times, depressingly karmic world)
>instead of samara (chosen of God, and a few other things).
>etymologically, samsara seems more fitting for your story.
>although...in a way either can work 'cause the author (not
>to get blasphemous or anything) has chosen this particular
>character to represent suicide.

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>question: why does joy have to be followed by sorrow?
>couldn't she just have some peace? ugh! lovin' this.

you know how I am.

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