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1369, Honey, I Love -- Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Sat Dec-11-04 09:12 AM
By Eloise Greenfield
Written thru the eyes of a child:
HONEY, I LOVE --
I love I love a lot of things -- a whole lot of things Like My cousin comes to visit and you know he's from the South Cause every word he says just kind of slides out of his mouth I like the way he whistles and I like the way he walks But honey, let me tell you that I LOVE the way he talks I LOVE the way my cousin talks
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The day is hot and icky and the sun sticks to my skin Mr. Davis turns the hose on, everybody jumps right in The water stings my stomach and I feel so nice & cool Honey, let me tell you that I LOVE a flying pool I love to "feel" a flying pool
AND ...
Renee comes out to play an brings her doll without a dress I make a dress with paper and that doll sure looks a mess We laugh so loud and long & hard the doll falls to the ground Honey, let me tell you that I LOVE that laughing sound I love to make the laughing sound
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My uncle's car is crowded and there's lots of food to eat We're going down the country where the church folks like to meet I'm lookin' out the window at the cows and trees outside Honey, let me tell you that I LOVE to take a ride I love to take a family ride
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My mama's on the sofa sewing buttons on my coat I go and sit beside her, I'm through playin' with my boat I hold her arm and kiss it 'cause it feels so soft and warm Honey, let me tell you that I LOVE my mama's arm I love to kiss my mama's arm
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It's not so late at night, but still I'm lying in my bed I guess I need my rest, least that's what my mama said She told me not to cry 'cause she don't want to hear a peep Honey, let me tell you I DON'T love to go to sleep I DO "NOT" LOVE TO GO TO SLEEP But I love I love a lot of things A whole lot of things And honey, I Love You Too
This poem ain't nutthin' spectacular by any means -- But it just reminds me of childhood & the simplicity of love -- Viewed behind the eyes of a child.
Seems like love don't become "complex" & confusing until you get older, nahmean? -- *sigh*
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