this read like a one-way battle.

G... you got crazy talent, and I could feel the knowledge (specially towards the end),
but this is a battle, and as such you gotta rip on your opponent...

Soulbrotha... you had some nice lines in there (the Lady Liberty one most notably)
but next time, you might want to leave out the skits and the grand entrance.
it hit me as superfluous and generally took away from your battle lines.

with all that said, I'm going with Soulbrotha...