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12556, King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by Zin, Wed Apr-07-04 08:47 AM
Round two the same way … all posts must be in my INBOX by 4 pm Thurs because the brackets weren’t even I got the second chance battle …so mofo’s won’t fuck up the thread and shit …don’t wine .. “I don’t want to hear it from bitches” ..
Round one …we saw some HEAT being tossed around …round two should be just as hot …the two I picked for the second chance round got picked cause they are determined individuals …and I want to see them in it …remember I’m just hosting …this shit doesn’t have anything to do with me ..so keep my name out of ya mouth..
Man up !!!





PG Vs. Soul brotha
Jayare Vs Mric
Kosher Vs Instant Axis
and the second chance battle
**Cza_Adonis Vs. BarTek**

12557, let the shit talking begin!!!!
Posted by Zin, Wed Apr-07-04 08:51 AM
ayo ... mofo's winning by two votes and shit ..it's real out here so you better tell ya moma's moma's moma to logon and vote for you and shit ...


12558, RE: let the shit talking begin!!!!
Posted by BarTek, Wed Apr-07-04 05:41 PM
lol
12559, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Apr-07-04 10:55 AM
hey zin, stop takin that shit personal, dont get mad cause i have fun at random peoples expense, its custom i throw ya bitch ass name it here and there, lmao, dont fuck with my traditions nukka, lmao
12560, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by Instant Axis, Wed Apr-07-04 01:44 PM
verse is in batches!!!!
12561, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by KosherSam, Wed Apr-07-04 08:24 PM
mine is in too... looks like we will be the first one posted...
12562, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by KosherSam, Thu Apr-08-04 04:40 AM
yo zin, if me and ax both sent the verses, where's the post?
12563, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Apr-08-04 05:30 AM
4pm buddy
12564, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by KosherSam, Thu Apr-08-04 06:15 AM
my bad... i thought 4 pm was just the deadline, and he was gonna post as soon as he had both verses
12565, murda rap, killem soft like roberta flack
Posted by MiracleRic, Wed Apr-07-04 07:28 PM
my verse is sent as well, farewell, to the flesh, the air swell to the breath, of a cryptkeeper, burn like infested pussys with a dickseeker, blast bass outta rick speaker, gas face, outta space, shit leaker, grim spit reaper, with a black hoody, distract woody-wood-pecker, ima goody-good hector camacho, inspect ya poncho, no describing the pain u in, other then sayin when u piss it feel like its raining men...not my verse, just flowin, i hit ya inbox
12566, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 04:23 AM
Verse in!
12567, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by illusionary, Thu Apr-08-04 06:50 AM
yall the wildest keep that flame thrower with gasoline in it! Check out the ill-ist ryhme i ever wrote and throw some comments if you can PEACE
12568, lunch time.. punching clock..
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 07:57 AM
givin myself about 15 to do this then I'm gonna get some food fuckers. where the fucks my comp you gonna be in on time?

Pappa

Edit: DONE. SoulBrother do not dissapoint man.
12569, RE: lunch time.. punching clock..
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 08:13 AM
wow 15 mins sharp.. surprise myself even.. I usually am over a few.
12570, kosher vs. Ax
Posted by Zin, Thu Apr-08-04 08:21 AM

kosher
Instantly i vaporize
wanna be tough guys
electrify the whites of your eyes
so you you cant even see what its like when doves cry
i lay more tracks than smack addicts at a blood drive
you dont wanna battle with this kosher soldier
rippin off your arms and beatin you with the shoulders
makin you nauseous
have you beggin for me to halt this
on point like swordfish
comin in with the raw shit
sharper than Rawkus
with the razorblade em-buh-lem
taking on ten of 'em
comin out swingin like a pendulem
i'm raising the bar
this tourney's gonna make me a star
and if you wanna spar
i'll be pete townsend, you can be the guitar
or we can do
like in godfather 2
i'm al pacino, you be diane keaton
any way you look at it its a one-sided beatin
school's in session, and you haven't met the grade
i'll knock you off your Axis and put you in retrograde
you wait for applause, but all you hear are the crickets
you wont get to round 3 even if you buy a ticket
maybe in san diego you can get away with these tactics
but to be the champ here takes skills, and you lack this
i'm your new Padre, and i'm hittin the mattress
with your mom tonight - she gave me Instant Access
so go home with that wack shit
you cant win, you bore me
and if this were a secret ballot, even YOU would vote for me

Ax
like chamiqua i holds-claws and bear slap ya froze thoughts.....you Kosher than slow pause.....ya verse makes me doze off.....snooze button attacked..you couldnt pull insurance if Ben held ya Aff-lack....plus you lack experience....ass backwards dilerious...last rapper to hear from this...grand master is spearing kids...like olympic discus you gettin thrown out the yard....Kosher was a special child....aka...a retard...i leave bars unfinished just to diminish ya writtens....cause id still be hotter than fat hands wearing mittens.....so listen Kosher...dill..bland...yeah whatever....ima momument dunny..you just a souvineer sweater...always worn...im concrete stainless steel never torn....forever swarm like the W brizzle....you the WB..disfuntional..heres a tissue....the missle heat seeks deletes ya weak speech....you beef..than eat meat....afterwords ya veg speaks....i sonic the hedge geeks on some poetry shit...you wildin out cuzzin and get ya conoly face split....oh holy grace kid...its Frak on the scene....you think its Kosher son...best fall back on ya lean....im the first Dream Team...you in that 6th place finish....dont test the god youngin or get ya facials blemished...

12571, Ax...barely
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Apr-08-04 11:50 AM
yo...this was s tie on 1st read,

kosher had some slightly better punches, and ax had the sicker flow, so it was hard to choose, and on 2nd read, ax's just came off more original

this was mad close tho, good shit to both
12572, cosign...
Posted by Otto, Fri Apr-09-04 08:08 AM
-Otto
12573, RE: kosher vs. Ax
Posted by jayare214, Thu Apr-08-04 12:09 PM
i give my nod to ax on the basis of better rhymescheme and more crerative punchlines. Kosher's wasnt bad it just didnt hit as hard as some of fraks shit...

like in godfather 2
i'm al pacino, you be diane keaton
any way you look at it its a one-sided beatin
school's in session, and you haven't met the grade

creative references....

but this...

like chamiqua i holds-claws and bear slap ya froze thoughts.....you Kosher than slow pause.....ya verse makes me doze off.....snooze button attacked..you couldnt pull insurance if Ben held ya Aff-lack....plus you lack experience....ass backwards dilerious...last rapper to hear from this...grand master is spearing kids...like olympic discus you gettin thrown out the yard....Kosher was a special child....aka...a retard...i leave bars unfinished just to diminish ya writtens....cause id still be hotter than fat hands wearing mittens

minus the aflack line was murdering shit

12574, RE: Ax
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 05:15 PM
Yo, Kosher, you came hot dun!

But,

"like olympic discus you gettin thrown out the yard....Kosher was a special child....aka...a retard"

haha, that ish had me chucklin 5 hours after I read it, what can I say, a memorable line such as this, gets the nod.

Ax.

Peace.
12575, Ax
Posted by soulchild, Fri Apr-09-04 06:49 AM
Though, upon first read, i was siding with Kosher, second time around, i was feeling Ax's flow.
___________________________
-Phyllis-


...that is all...
12576, Congrats
Posted by KosherSam, Mon Apr-12-04 03:17 AM
That was a good battle, and ill admit, you had me laughin at the retard line... good luck in the next round
12577, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by cza_adonis, Thu Apr-08-04 08:28 AM
i know ya didn't expect for it to end this way
killed in a line or two in round two on the second day
young you easy to capture like lame little prey


i'm interrupting your style like a break beat
and when i'm done with ya you'll know ya got hit with real heat
i'm wondering why would you try and compette
it was over before it started you came and left
cause i ripped into you like when the nile got parted


i'm melting down ya whole sound station
why you hesitating looking for help
cause cza putting the tek on the bottom shelf
your worth is slim to none i could get a better pop from buble gum


i got to end this ya know cause if i continue
then thier will be no one left for me to rip into
got yall wack emcees all tied up like ya latest tennis shoes





i ran outta time still gonaa run with it though
cza adonis

12578, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 08:35 AM
Yo, edit your verse out of this post, and inbox it to Zin. He will post yours and mine.

Peace.
12579, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by cza_adonis, Thu Apr-08-04 08:45 AM
i did i sent it to his inbox
12580, RE: King O the Ring (Round Two)
Posted by Decstar, Thu Apr-08-04 08:47 AM
yo, it's to mine now, fam. send it to me



12581, AIGHT, TOURNEY CHANGE-UP....
Posted by Decstar, Thu Apr-08-04 08:44 AM
i'm tha new holder of tha tourney. i'm takin zin spot since he gettin hitched up. so, all verses will be sent to me til he comes back.

same rules, same time, same everything.

do ya thing, peoples. lets get tha gunshots gooiinnnn!!!
12582, ALL FINAL VERSES TO ME, PLEASE
Posted by Decstar, Thu Apr-08-04 08:55 AM
i'm not callin anybody out or nothing, but i only have bartek's, pg's and ric's verses. to their opponents, i'm givin tha extended time to. u have until 4:15-4:20. if it's not in MY, DECSTAR'S INBOX, u will be eliminated and teks, pg's and ric's verse will be posted and they will be on to tha next round.


more details about round 3 later



thank you, peoples
12583, RE: ALL FINAL VERSES TO ME, PLEASE
Posted by Instant Axis, Thu Apr-08-04 08:59 AM
bitches gettin by on forfiets while me and Kosh actually doin this shit!!!!! fuck yall!!!!...lmao!!!
12584, RE: ALL FINAL VERSES TO ME, PLEASE
Posted by KosherSam, Thu Apr-08-04 09:07 AM
word... i sent my verse again though... i know its stupid, but better safe than sorry, lol... we better not be the only battle this round

EDIT: fuck 3 byes, why not just save a round, and have a 3 way battle between the 3 verses you have, and the winner battles the winner of me and ax for the title?
12585, RE: ALL FINAL VERSES TO ME, PLEASE
Posted by cza_adonis, Thu Apr-08-04 09:10 AM
i've sent mine like three times so someone should have it
12586, RE: ALL FINAL VERSES TO ME, PLEASE
Posted by cza_adonis, Thu Apr-08-04 09:11 AM
ain't nobody forfiting my shit is in i'm waiting for it to be posted
12587, Jayare Vs Mric
Posted by Decstar, Thu Apr-08-04 09:14 AM
Jayare:

miracle ric the miracles this: that you still got lips
that ya tounge teeth and cheeks anint burnt to a crisp
that you aint glued to ya screen havin epileptic fits
from the frequency of hits punched lined when i spit
but you aint finished reading you decieving yaself
bleieving fools chances like playing lotteris for wealth
fate dancing enchanted dreams your mind escapes this toture
you sorta like little wayne a little lame with little flame
scorcher? imposter! im the enforcer body contorter
you the tortoise im a lion fuck the hare! a author
of rhymes penned poetically perfectly punchin you pundits
nitwits with zits im bustin everything you come wit
dumb shit yous ireelevant im an elephant stompinya
dung droppin ya my trunk squeez the shit outts ya
dissapear like hoffa stop ya cold like chicks with thick bush
ya lyrics is sleek and cunning only cuz you lick bush
breath rank fresh tank of gas for this whup ass
cuz i got a hemmy powered leg for your butch ass
yous a dude but a dyke stil write with spite filled
quills devoid of ink full of fear of what i might spill
i mighth kill but caution zin warned ya boy
about playing in his living room with severed torsos for toys.


MircleRic:

(ayA)R(e) stands for junior, push his petal to the floor, laid to rest in petunias, retune ya straight daily tribune’d ya, body found in the harbor, Barber, shape up my sack close, here's a fat dose, for those intolerant to lactose, tiddy residue, im the gritty devil who, vexes entry level crews, threw hexes to, those whose chest is metal dude, tin man, I question ya heart, I bare flows on scarecrows that use rectal darts, hot shit like years of repressin farts, one special aroma, you should play a vegetables part, and rest in a coma, gomer…poyle(sp?), the type of hot shit, that makes a colon smile, im silky johnson with a roman style, this gladiator would gladly hate ya, and part ya wig, like u aint combed in awhile, NumbNuts!!!! Whats your major malfunction!!!…I flow like the Nile Punchin, continental drifts when the river bowels eruptin, “Pardon the Interruption…this is a news update…Jayare…is softer then the middle of a little Debbie cupcake” hold Fickle-Freddie’s nuts straight, oh for fucks sake, I guess ya can never duck fate, unless there’s a strange vessel, that may increase ya pain threshold, i’ll still leave ya damn flesh cold, they call me the main esco…bar, im the best known…czar, lift ya dress code, cause I only seen ya breasts so…far, plant the seed of death’s chorus, ya niggas bore us, a son, by the name of rigimortis, it’s the tortoise, leavin the bunnies hung, along with the snot-nosed gatos runnin from…21
12588, both hot very very close... Jay.......... BUT
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 11:17 AM
Jayare's verse was mad hot.. they both were really some nice shit..... I have to DQ Jayare for basically calling Ric a Dyke which is a rule breaker... Ric came real close with the Fickle Freddies nuts too though so it's up to Dec what to do...

I suppose if Ima let tek through on his 22 calibre lead spitting asshole I should allow Jayare this.
12589, Jay
Posted by KosherSam, Thu Apr-08-04 12:35 PM
EXTREMELY close, both were hot, but i give jay the slight nudge
12590, ric
Posted by Vash the Stampede, Thu Apr-08-04 02:07 PM
that little debby shyt was funny.

an' that tin man line was hot.

none of jay's shyt really stood out to me. i ain't like his first four bars. it took too long to get to the punch line for me. i was bored by the tyme i got there

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro
12591, RE: Mric
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 02:09 PM
Yo, Jayare punched Ric a hulleva lot more, and the punches were evident, however, Ric punched Jay with WITS, and his ish was very original, and his flow was straight ridiculous. I want to give the vote to Jay, but Ric took it by the slimmest of margins. Jay, your lines were hot, but, you did not compete wit ish like:

they call me the main esco…bar, im the best known…czar, lift ya dress code, cause I only seen ya breasts so…far

If your flow was a bit tighter, and you got a tad complex like you can, you would have taken this without a doubt.

SLIMMEST of Margins here, and Ric took it, only because of the complex wit of his lines.

peace.

12592, RE: Jayare Vs Mric
Posted by Instant Axis, Thu Apr-08-04 03:40 PM
this was tough yo.. i had J winning then this after i read his verse and then i read Ric's and this right here made me lean Ric's way

"threw hexes to, those whose chest is metal dude, tin man, I question ya heart, I bare flows on scarecrows that use rectal darts, hot shit like years of repressin farts"

that shit was just nasty mang!!!...damn...and nothin takin from j cause he dropped an ill verse but i felt Ric edged him on this...peace yall.
12593, (tie )ya'll nukkas can't play by the rules can you?
Posted by Zin, Fri Apr-09-04 06:15 AM
some hot shit but you insist on doing it ya own way ...No Gay JOKES...it's up to dec i just came back to peep the verses really quick ...a real mcee would have other shit to say ...

12594, RE: Jayare Vs Mric
Posted by robynwildchild, Fri Apr-09-04 08:34 AM
“Pardon the Interruption…this is a news update…Jayare…is softer then the middle of a little Debbie cupcake” hold Fickle-Freddie’s nuts straight, oh for fucks sake, I guess ya can never duck fate,

maybe he's too busy tryin to fuck a date...
wait. he ain't got one.. lol.. go ric
12595, Cza_Adonis Vs. BarTek
Posted by Decstar, Thu Apr-08-04 09:23 AM
Cza_Adonis:

i know ya didn't expect for it to end this way
killed ya in a line or two in round two on the second day
young you a easy capture like lame little prey

i'm interrupting your style like a break beat
and when i'm done with ya you'll know you got hit with real heat
i'm wondering why would you try and compette
it was over before it started you came and left
cause i ripped into you like when the nile got parted


i'm melting down your sound station
why you hesitating looking for help
cza adonis putting tek on the bottom shelf
your worth is slim and none i could get better pop from a stick of gum


i got to end this ya know if i continue
then their will be no one left for me to rip into
got this wack emcee tek tied up like the latest tennins shoe


(i shouldnt allow this, cuz u posted it, but i'll buy ya story)


bartek:

Cza_Adonis, you facin a true microphonist, published and recorded,
what can you possibly offer in retaliation?
you still ventilatin from the second wind zin gave you,
my path was sealed, when i put my name down,
your destiny was written when you drew my name dunn,
you ain't gettin no props, you a hand down,
recollect, when ya took that pen,
ya ever thought you'd walk my den?
surely, i know my zen, i got dimes, you only got 1/10th,
imma put ya soul on ice, freeze ya, even antifreeze couldn't eeze ya,
i spit to beat deamons, you a lil willy but your name ain't beaman,
ya wanna get silly, imma cleaver, ya wanna get illy, imma liver,
poisonous, now do confess, you been laid to rest,
excuse me miss,
was this boy your son? does he have a gun,
cause ain't no led hotter than mine,
imm grimey, you right behind me, catching my shit,
fart 22!, fart 33!, fart 36!
im gassin you up, cuz you about to blow,
director's cut, you on the murder scene,
laid out like bloodied coke,
i can't lose, you can't fuse a proper bomb,
tek fashioned ya apparatus, wit a pipe for a microphone,
right yo,
FIRE IN THE HOLE,
stick it in ya fanny, hold up! you must be the hip hop grannie,
hippity to the hop,
cause i got this kid, on fucked,
and his mic on lock.
12596, Tek - - - - if he ain't DQed
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 11:08 AM
Tek had the better verse but it had mad filler nothhing to exciting for punxches and I think he might have broken the rules...

but that said CZA stayed within the rules but overall I found his verse way too simple some punches but nothing that really bodied Tek at all..

Tek I know you say you beat me with your verse but honestly I think you can do a lot better.. CZA I don't know what to say the tennis shoe was your best line and it just didn't pack enough.
12597, cosignal
Posted by Frosted_Flake, Thu Apr-08-04 01:06 PM
tek came nicer but...
<stick it in ya fanny>
sounds an awful lot like a gay crack.
you in the 2nd round homie, you should know the rules :)

so I'ma give this to cza, unless we're relaxin the statutes of limitations
12598, RE: cosignal
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 01:36 PM
fanny as in FANNY PACK.

Damn y'all, y'all have some dirty minds!

Sheesh.

peace.
12599, ok then
Posted by Frosted_Flake, Thu Apr-08-04 01:47 PM
you gotta watch those double entendre's...
you get my vote this round.
12600, CZA...on rules ...tek tis was a hot verse ..but
Posted by Zin, Fri Apr-09-04 06:20 AM
no killing .....did you EVEN bother to read the RULES ...and to think you were a second chance battle CZA..to the next round ...but it's up to LIK..
12601, Bartek
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Apr-08-04 11:23 AM
this wasnt a very pretty one here, but i think tek got it
12602, I gotta agree...
Posted by KosherSam, Thu Apr-08-04 12:37 PM
this wasnt too exciting on either end, but i give tek the nod if he isnt dq'ed
12603, bartek
Posted by jayare214, Thu Apr-08-04 01:44 PM
tek killed him
12604, tek
Posted by Vash the Stampede, Thu Apr-08-04 02:21 PM
i thought both could of came harder, but tek definately was better. that fart shyt was silly as hell though.

the Signature starts now:

yo, yo, yo, whut's up y'all.

the group is the ILLIANCE.

the url is www.illiancerecords.com.
/\free music is there, an' a forum/\

buy the album.

support your fuckin' up an' comin' artist.

oh, an' somebody said that this was sig worthy, so, here it is:
"i like some of his music. i just don't like the idea of him being a marketing ploy to get me to waste perfectly good backpack money on a rocafella cd."

fuckers

war

outro
12605, Bartek
Posted by Instant Axis, Thu Apr-08-04 03:17 PM
Tek took this quite easy and didnt have a great verse but he did have some shit i believe went over peoples heads and my mans Cza just didnt have it this round...very basic and nothing that cut thru tek...you was dull today Adonis...we all hit that block and it appeared you did in this battle...Tek wins..peace.
12606, BarTek
Posted by soulchild, Fri Apr-09-04 07:00 AM
i'll agree with the masses...his was the more interesting of the two.
___________________________
-Phyllis-


...that is all...
12607, AIGHT, THIS ONE IS IN THA BOOKS......
Posted by Decstar, Fri Apr-09-04 07:22 AM
tek skunked du.

tek to tha next round
12608, BarTek
Posted by Otto, Fri Apr-09-04 08:20 AM
-otto


12609, GOT DAMNIT, SB.......
Posted by Decstar, Thu Apr-08-04 09:27 AM
u're eliminated, playa.

damn shame, got spanked by PG and he didnt even lay hands on you. oh well..........PG's verse....


pg
you gonna up your level in attempts at competition
but your verse come off more like incompetent wishin
the pomp of your conviction gets stomped by the simplest diction
Slick n quick hits split ya sick wits like Moses split liquids
Solo with no flow SoulBro poses like beats without the kicks
I got all the kids
confined to ya bombed mind Pappa got the custody papers ya mom signed
insurrection catch infection like "love you long time"
don't matter what punches your throw it be the wrong line at the wrong time
Like two moves till checkmate and you pushin the Pawn Grind
right? I L I L L With the knight then slide the bishop a lay ya tits up even before the fight
Yeah got ya mitts cupped over ya bitch nuts and I haven't even gotten to the switch ups
like how now Ima come kindly
it's alright you ain't got shit you fighting blindly
don't mind me I can't help but to destroy you it's how the universe designed me
And you still in holding screaming at god "please come find me"
sorry not now and no other time B
You lost and gone forever like Clementine
I chew MCs and spit gasoline you eat shit and puke lemon pine
your hardest rhyme just plastercine
this is reality it's time for you to get past your dream
You built your whole foundation on a plaster beam
now your house is bout to collapse
Crapped out synapse caught ya a kindergarten relapse
writing in bold caps with a crayon in a one-piece goof suit made of rayon
LOL ah fuck it forget it son I throw my hands up go ahead and play on
Your best rhymes couldn't even get the clothes off of Rae Dawn


12610, this sucks.
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 09:51 AM
I want someone to tell me if anybodies verse this round beats this.

SoulBrother... man what happenned? I don't really know you yet but you really don't strike me as someon to bitch out so I think you probably got a decent reason... Hollar at me

man I fucking run battling around here and look at this shit I can't even get a battle in a fucking tournament.. It's like inviting Tiger Woods to your Open and telling him the competition all quit.. I might as well just go to the fucking driving range.. or the goddam clubhouse and drink myself into a stupor... and I'd still beat any fucking punk that showed up!
12611, RE: this sucks.
Posted by Instant Axis, Thu Apr-08-04 09:55 AM
except this punk fucka!!!!
12612, RE: this sucks.
Posted by Soulbrotha, Thu Apr-08-04 10:28 AM
Umm hold up. I just sent my verse to Zin...you guys don't expect a dude to be online all day do you? People have got lives too you know?
12613, your lying!!!!
Posted by Zin, Fri Apr-09-04 06:25 AM
My verse...sorry it was late...been mad busy all day today...
From: Soulbrotha

c'mon mang ....you out stop bitching

12614, RE: your lying!!!!
Posted by PG, Fri Apr-09-04 06:32 AM
his verse is down there... I don't care if he wrote it after I dropped or took three months to fine tune the dam thing... I don't want two DQs... read the verses the end result is the same anyway but toss a vote at it regardless of whether it's legit or not.

Oh and besides that.. If I don't catch you online today... Mine to yours happiness fam hope it's everything wonderful it can be.
12615, RE: this sucks.
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 10:28 AM
My verse was better.

By a landslide!

peace.
12616, RE: this sucks.
Posted by Soulbrotha, Thu Apr-08-04 10:29 AM
Decstar, I got your msg just now and I've sent my verse in. If it still counts.
12617, dam Decstar went to work for the night man.....
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 10:31 AM
just drop your verse.... cause he wouldn't be online till much later anyway
12618, RE: dam Decstar went to work for the night man.....
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 10:34 AM
PG...

My verse was better than yours by a L A N D S L I D E,

Kapish??

LAAAAANNNDDDSLLLIIIIIDDDEEEEE!

Don't forget.

Peace.

PS; LLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE, and, 'ur verse'.

Good lookin.

12619, I suppose a little birdy told you that shit huh
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 10:36 AM
anyone really agree with Tecky?

Pappa
12620, RE: I suppose a little birdy told you that shit huh
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 10:39 AM
Pappa, please just accept the truth.

Original:

LANDSLIDE

Shadow:

EDILSDNAL

Either way you look at it.

LANDSLIDE!

Tecky don't lie!
12621, lol sure and neither of us is biased here at all
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 11:03 AM
GTFOOHWTBS.... I ain't seeing it and that's the honest truth... what I see is pretty much the same level I saw in those nine rounds back in the day.. in fact some of that was better... I also see stuff borderline on the rules and honestly too much filler...

But like I say let's hear someone agree with one of us let the heads call it not us.
12622, RE: lol sure and neither of us is biased here at all
Posted by Instant Axis, Thu Apr-08-04 11:09 AM
my shit is better than both of yall!!!! bwaaaaaah!!!
12623, RE: lol sure and neither of us is biased here at all
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 11:13 AM
Ax! I'll eat you and poo you out on a picture of you!!

DO NOT TEST FATE! bwwwwwaaahahaha.
12624, RE: lol sure and neither of us is biased here at all
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 11:11 AM
PG, you are forgetting. Zin laid out the rules, but I am the LAW!

Secondly,

I have been playing the fiddle, you being the fiddle! I am preparing your mind, for our battle, which will occur in the next bout. You will write your verse, knowing, that my verse was a LANDSLIDE! ahead of yours. I am pre-conditioning your loss! Now, please excuse me Peasent Gnome, you are much too short and too poor, to speak in my court!

*Grabs cape and whirls away from the Peasent Gnome!*

*Court applauds the departure of the King, turns back on the Peasent Gnome and throws peanuts at him!*

Exuent.
12625, lol
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 11:22 AM
bwahahaha that's some shit grasshopper...

it was either you, syllabic, prodigeous poet or Lax that once said to some punk trying to play the pychological game with me...

"don't battle PG, he already won."

me battling you again is like sending Alfredson back to Pee Wee C.... 9 nothing at least.
12626, RE: lol
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 11:26 AM
LOL, this battle is the best one. EVER.

Peace.


12627, RE: dam Decstar went to work for the night man.....
Posted by Soulbrotha, Thu Apr-08-04 10:37 AM
>just drop your verse.... cause he wouldn't be online till
>much later anyway
============================================
Alright then here it is:

================================================================
No doubt…..Parental Guidance…someone please deem this necessary aight?

Word ‘em up

The incomptetent competition remains completely non-existent,
I Place Garbage under Pressure Grips, simply Pausing Gradients
Therefore you-can-label-this, unrequited victory,
‘Cos even if OKP gave it freely, PG’d still accept defeat meekly,
Let-me-not-be, the one to even call you out,
You can’t even box yourself well beyond your shadows of doubt,
Lights out!
These letters spread to envelope your clout, you mailing losses,
The only way your posts will ever get brought out,
Purposely Guide your scripts into tight fisticuffs,
Put a fist in your e-steez, before you call a bluff,
You talk tough, but your paragraphs are legless,
Your thoughts must be in a mud puddle obviously you’re senseless,
Its as if you dialed 9-1-1 disconnected – situation helpless,
Worse case scenario, my best comes to better than best,
Obituary your style and leave ‘em buried there laid-to-rest
Or better-yet, pray-for-a-vet,
‘cos even all the dopest emcees ever combined
Couldn’t save your bars n’ texts from this sudden a-r-rest



12628, SoulBrother vs. PG
Posted by Instant Axis, Thu Apr-08-04 03:46 PM
PG
pg
you gonna up your level in attempts at competition
but your verse come off more like incompetent wishin
the pomp of your conviction gets stomped by the simplest diction
Slick n quick hits split ya sick wits like Moses split liquids
Solo with no flow SoulBro poses like beats without the kicks
I got all the kids
confined to ya bombed mind Pappa got the custody papers ya mom signed
insurrection catch infection like "love you long time"
don't matter what punches your throw it be the wrong line at the wrong time
Like two moves till checkmate and you pushin the Pawn Grind
right? I L I L L With the knight then slide the bishop a lay ya tits up even before the fight
Yeah got ya mitts cupped over ya bitch nuts and I haven't even gotten to the switch ups
like how now Ima come kindly
it's alright you ain't got shit you fighting blindly
don't mind me I can't help but to destroy you it's how the universe designed me
And you still in holding screaming at god "please come find me"
sorry not now and no other time B
You lost and gone forever like Clementine
I chew MCs and spit gasoline you eat shit and puke lemon pine
your hardest rhyme just plastercine
this is reality it's time for you to get past your dream
You built your whole foundation on a plaster beam
now your house is bout to collapse
Crapped out synapse caught ya a kindergarten relapse
writing in bold caps with a crayon in a one-piece goof suit made of rayon
LOL ah fuck it forget it son I throw my hands up go ahead and play on
Your best rhymes couldn't even get the clothes off of Rae Dawn



Soulbrother


No doubt…..Parental Guidance…someone please deem this necessary aight?

Word ‘em up

The incomptetent competition remains completely non-existent,
I Place Garbage under Pressure Grips, simply Pausing Gradients
Therefore you-can-label-this, unrequited victory,
‘Cos even if OKP gave it freely, PG’d still accept defeat meekly,
Let-me-not-be, the one to even call you out,
You can’t even box yourself well beyond your shadows of doubt,
Lights out!
These letters spread to envelope your clout, you mailing losses,
The only way your posts will ever get brought out,
Purposely Guide your scripts into tight fisticuffs,
Put a fist in your e-steez, before you call a bluff,
You talk tough, but your paragraphs are legless,
Your thoughts must be in a mud puddle obviously you’re senseless,
Its as if you dialed 9-1-1 disconnected – situation helpless,
Worse case scenario, my best comes to better than best,
Obituary your style and leave ‘em buried there laid-to-rest
Or better-yet, pray-for-a-vet,
‘cos even all the dopest emcees ever combined
Couldn’t save your bars n’ texts from this sudden a-r-rest
12629, PG
Posted by Instant Axis, Thu Apr-08-04 03:55 PM
PG

"Yeah got ya mitts cupped over ya bitch nuts and I haven't even gotten to the switch ups
like how now Ima come kindly
it's alright you ain't got shit you fighting blindly
don't mind me I can't help but to destroy you it's how the universe designed me
And you still in holding screaming at god "please come find me"

yeah....that was just cooooooold blooooded.....and the beginning of PG's verse was some of the smoothest rhyming ive seen in your bars yo.

SoulBrother

"Worse case scenario, my best comes to better than best,
Obituary your style and leave ‘em buried there laid-to-rest"

that was hot but really all that i saw that tainted PG's armor

this battle was decent...i feel both could have came better but i give the nod to PG in this one...peace fellas.
12630, PG
Posted by soulchild, Fri Apr-09-04 07:16 AM
love the "love you long time" line
___________________________
-Phyllis-


...that is all...
12631, naw...
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 10:34 AM
and you really did push the rules... I might have to DQ you in my vote for that.
12632, RE: naw...
Posted by Soulbrotha, Thu Apr-08-04 10:48 AM
I know I pushed the rules but I didn't have a choice in this situation.

Whatever you guys decide is fine with me. At least let it not be said that I walked away from a battle.
12633, as far as I am concerned you fine.
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 10:56 AM
forreal.... heck if CZA had actually ever dropped against me he'd be fine as far as I am concerned as well...

I was surprised you didn't show and I knew you weren't running so I'm just glad you made it holmes... hopefully cats see it and give us some votes on this.


12634, RE: this sucks.
Posted by cza_adonis, Sun Apr-11-04 05:33 AM
ayo good deal bartek my shit was a bit weak but it'll change good luck in the next round playa

peace cza repin mad kidz
12635, RE: this sucks.
Posted by BarTek, Mon Apr-12-04 03:43 AM
Good battle yo, I know you got a lot more in ya. You came easy at me, I don't doubt.

Peace yo.
12636, if SB's verse is allowed...
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Apr-08-04 11:36 AM
I say SoulBrotha, that shadow of a doubt line was the line that made if official
12637, broadcasting from the field
Posted by blak_yukon, Thu Apr-08-04 10:47 AM
This is blak yukon reporting live from the freestyle board um...KING O'DA'RING! freestyle tournament...and um, its getting pretty personal as most expected...lots of snide comments thrown about before and after verses have been submitted. This event has made the most humble come out of character ie,Gsquared...while the usual cats with a mouthful to say, Tecky and PG continue to serve up the most entertaining parts of this game.
Meanwhile, the always consistant Instant Axis gave his usual shrapnel filled verbal assault against a rather impressive upstart Frosted Flake,ha...no soaking that nucca in milk makin'em wilt,huh. Hey, listen this is y'man on the scene...Uncle blak for YUKON MAGAZINE...

always wash behind your ears...signing out

*oh yes,PS to big mazin on the gettin hitched right about now...
12638, lol
Posted by Frosted_Flake, Thu Apr-08-04 02:35 PM
and now back to the studio
12639, RE: broadcasting from the field
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 05:22 PM
lol, that was ill!!!

Peace fam! keep droppin them comments, this is mad entertaining!

Ayo, here is the scoop, IMMMA EAT PG next round! I can feel it! He gonna draw my name and poo himself!

lol

peace.
12640, On a side note...
Posted by KosherSam, Thu Apr-08-04 11:38 AM
I seen people referring to me as "Kosher", and I recently noticed that there is a guy on here who posts under the name "Kosher" so I just felt the need to make it known that we are not the same person. That is all...

ps - is anyone gona vote on me vs. ax?
12641, I will I will.. Haven't read it yet
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 11:40 AM
and I'm about to split for the day but I will vote.
12642, RE: I will I will.. Haven't read it yet
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 11:42 AM
PEASENT GNOME! WHAT ARE YOU DOING OUT OF YOUR CAGE?!!
12643, tek..
Posted by PG, Thu Apr-08-04 11:44 AM
you clowning yourself... you ain't even spelled Peasant right.. shit you gonna try this stuff get it right.

Mwaaah.. see ya/
12644, ya mama!!!!!!!
Posted by jayare214, Thu Apr-08-04 11:51 AM
heheheheh
i just felt left out.
-j
12645, RE: tek..
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 11:58 AM
INSULANT GNOME! You will be fed Parrot feed for that remark! I have spoken with my advisors, and we have decided, that it would be best to remove the lock on your cage! If you can't see the lock, you can't think about freedom, as there is no way out of your cagely home!!! NOT COSY! but CAGELY!
12646, RE: Ahh!
Posted by BarTek, Thu Apr-08-04 12:21 PM
I see you have learned silence! GOOD Gnome! Very good!
12647, come on tek work it!
Posted by PG, Fri Apr-09-04 09:10 AM
lol
12648, GOT DAMN
Posted by Decstar, Thu Apr-08-04 05:24 PM
i leave to go to work and ya'll do this shit. fuckin up all tha rules and shit. fuck is wrong wit ya'll.

u know what............i like this. i aint zin. fuck zin right now. i'm heated i cant catch tha b party, but that's cool.

anyway, new rules. no holes barred. eat ya opponent alive, BUT, keep a min. curse words, be VERY creative, and no long ass verses. no gunplay either, especially when ya'll cats aint gonna do that bullshit. be gully but realistic, feels me.

votin is extended til 1pm EST monday. then u'll have til 4 pm TUESDAY........TUESDAY, people, 4 muthafuckin o clock. no late verses will be acceptin. no bullshit will be accepted. if i find "i'll kill a nigga" or any gunplay, YA CUT. if i find any racial slurs or anything, YA CUT.

ya wanna bitch and moan, zin'll put a foot in ya ass. no bitches allowed in this tourney.


thank ya kindly

nice job by everyone slayin each other......especially Jayare and Ric....i'm takin my black ass to bed.


PEACES
12649, ARCHIVE PLEASE
Posted by MiracleRic, Thu Apr-15-04 04:43 PM
despite the tourney outcomes, these need to be archived, lol

12650, ARCHIVE
Posted by BarTek, Tue Apr-20-04 07:00 PM
Please.