"Infectious w/insatiable thoughts
Of animated details of interludes
&
loops w/o the hooks.."

really draws you in.. that's wrong. i'm unable to take erotic poetry seriously, but you had me with this:

"a diatribe of expressions
fester at the tip of my
tongue saturated w/sex
longin 4 the moment
to submerge in between the lips
of funk
engulf his sweetness
that keeps me wet
on his long days from home"

sad too. hope he's back soon
bless