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12205, ouch
Posted by lunaeco, Tue May-11-04 04:48 PM
i don't see this sharpness in your other pieces. seems like you're defining where you want to draw the line (i can't find the words i mean) but its wonderful poetry, not sure if you're really that harsh is what i mean
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