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11752, william
Posted by mindful, Tue Jun-29-04 07:30 PM
u really should expand on this:

I hope he hurts you. I hope your heart shatters into a thousand pieces, and I hope that you're too busy crying to pick them up. I tried so hard to chase away your troubles. Your tears caused a chain reaction, and soon my river flowed into yours. Now I hope you drown.

because judging from the above lines... there is more there, and i... would love to see what else could unfold from it. i like the rawness of those very lines... u... damn near... hit the dog... get my drift?
















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