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11512, my hands hurt from trying to grip emptiness
Posted by mindful, Mon Aug-02-04 04:39 PM
that one line alone... seems as if it's the most important line in the damn poem... u're writing it all out... and trust me, this is the way to go lady...

i motion for him to cross over
he says he can't because other people will see

ive never asked him
but i want to know why he's so ashamed
to be by my side
to admit that i make him stronger
ive never asked him
but i want to know why im treated as an extra
you know, those seat fillers at award shows
who give up their spots when someone more important comes along

i lost him on a thursday
only to think of him 2 hours later
im waiting patiently, scanning the traffic
walking the boulevard
sitting at our cafe
i refuse to believe
that he may be gone forever

you've got gold on ur fingertips...

Peace~











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