is 6 syllables but i used it b/c aiden waves last line was the same. i didnt want to change it.


the second line is 7 though..

our- one
silhouettes- three
dance- one
under- two = 7

i just checked all of them.

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"At least embarrassment is not an imitation.
It's intimacy for beginners,
the orgasm no one cares to fake.
I almost admire it. I almost wrote despise." -Alice Fulton

"The future is a grey seagull
Tattling in its cat-voice of departure.
Age and terror, like nurses, attend her,
And a drowned man, complaining of the great cold,
Crawls up out of the sea."
-Sylvia Plath

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that inhabits you for a moment
only. I would like to be that unnoticed
& that necessary." -Margaret Atwood