hey I like the imagery like being there. one thing when u wrote of watching her as she walked ahead of you. somehow i was outside the "Chili Bowl" watchin yall walkin down U street then abruptly
bought back when u said it was gettin crowded...
It worked tho cause it was like flashback...."Chili Bowl" scene III

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