G Love- you took me there with the short stopping lines they flowed like clicks from the camera.
The slow, exaggerated flow of this made me feel like I was a part of the picture. 8.7

Mute- You took me along the disenfranchised part of growing up and feeling loss. I especially dug the alchemy lines and the way you repeated it at the end. It gave closure to this piece.
8.4