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6635, RE: Poetic Imbalance
Posted by PhotoSynthesis, Thu Jan-16-03 08:37 PM
I'm quite familiar with IMBALANCES -- (Being a Libra always tippin' the scales) -- But this particular flow totally knocked me off balance with a melancholy punch!

And these words hit below da belt:

>just stop for a minute,
>forget about the past.
>contemplate and assume
>that you understand the truth.
>reality is hidden
>behind a mask of confused thoughts.
>read the spaces between the lines
>of my wasted and inane eternity.

>valuing the shallow
>and losing all my hope.
>everything's lost inside the dark.
>searching,
>hoping,
>wishing,
>praying to my idols.
>beauty is thrown away
>and life is that much more convenient.
>destitute and alone.

I'm sighing -- But smiling!


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