honestly when u started out, I wasn't sure where u going with it..but when it hit the second stanza..it just illumited excellence. My fav parts:

and I've
>blown the dust from between
>my fingers; digging in dirt
>trying to retrieve my roots;

>I've tugged onto little gurl,
>afraid to let her go,
>because grown women don't
>need direction.

The final line in the poem, makes it complete..in an incompletly/unsure kinda way :S..u knowhatimsayingtho..right :)