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16322, did you stop in mid poem?
Posted by mindful, Wed Dec-01-04 12:55 PM
the ending reads as if so... but here...

i would do it without a second thought
i'm still caught up in you, the promise astonishes
more precious than what could be bought
when hope holds weight in long winded wishes
i miss you, miss
do you miss me? miss we?
miss us?

ahh... makes me wonder why you are so hard on urself... Peace~



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