im not talkin like im the best emcee.. but maybe im giving this cuz i would like for one day someone to do this to my battles lol
but i have been watching tourneys and analyzin battlecats since 1997 (shit- peace to war, danger, onlyone and my aol clique lol)
anyway,
im still due to battle zin, samari shampoo (sp?) and jayare (smile)
but i quoted the best punchlines.... and voted among


>hdub:


>no joke, a ric win's "gonna take a miracle"
>it's hysterical, him and zin jerk spherical
>in numerical posts, talk smack in countless threads
>dub knocks 'em dead flowing dirty like unwashed dreads

>sew L's to chests with lyric threads and beat needles
>beat these twins zin and ric like they dee dum tweedles
>like the beatles, no fad- i'm a full fledged invasion
>ric loses placement, outranked by caucasians
>so amazing, dub got soul without melanin
>i stay at forefronts, the rest look irrelevant
>spit elements, a force of nature made to win
>ric's buried, burned, blown away with earth fire and wind

>>dont give a fuck about ric's rhymes, dimes, and other two bit
>cares
>you're nothing to me ric! just one of zin's pubic hairs


> MiracleRic:
         

>u couldn’t drop hot shit, if u spit from rectums,
>u toads, im sick like I lick infections


>First verse versus nuke…two bodies
>ur hearse is cute, like a circus coupe

>u turle-DOVEs, act like soaps
>i spit fertile floods, u lack tight quotes

>my battlecry’s vicious, u even whine lame,
>“Ric wont spit within my timeframe”


well hdub wins this one only cuz he had MORE punchlines

RIC i always have ur back but u need to lessen the commas and the "yogi bear" type of punches...if u cant think of shit to say just put emotions into it and wyal out! (i've been there before)
PG is great for that look at his shit when he goes off, i love it!

say stupid creative shit
outthink the others
FUCK BATTLING LIKE ANYONE ELSE (shit this deserves a post) lol

remember my line "smack ragu on ya brake pads"
well it was just straight stupid.. but u had to admit.. it made ya laugh even tho it didnt make sense and it just went wit the verse...

hdub< i was really feeling certain parts but it was like u stopped just as ur verse was getting fire.... i wanted more & u left me hangin
but ur punchlines were a bit stronger and there were more of them so it held ur verse together better

but voting on punchlines (who produced more).. hdub wins this one. <waving flags>
next


-lol I write battle verses to Mariah Carey songs...

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