first... Dash, that was some sick wordplay. a couple lines dragged
but otherwise it read AND sounded well (I read 'em out loud).
my first time seeing you on here and I was duly impressed.

Ric... more sickness, coming from you that's pretty standard.
your lines weren't quite as memorable (I can still see Dash holdin the sun)
but they definitely flowed well.

I would call this a tie, but Ric brought more lines to the table.
4 more nice lines from Dash and I would call this one even.