from "payback is a grandmother":
"Eight million stories got me runnin in place, it's gettin tricky
(like who?) like dude, that do drum'n'bass"

wack as shit... the timing, the phrasing, the fuggin' idea is wack. comm really disappointed me with that line...

and i don' care what ANYBODY says about its intent or the message, "a song for assata" is straight up BOOTY! it's all wack... comm's just on a narrative tip there... doesn't bring anythin' new to the story... i've always been told in writing, if you're gonna tell someone else's story, bring something new to it... not that you have to make shit up... but something besides just a retelling of it...

just my (not so) humble opinion...
-k

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"without awareness, there is no life... only activity"