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94851, listened again
Posted by spirit, Sun Nov-18-07 08:04 PM
okay, some thoughts...this all comes from that dangerous love they call fandom...ha.

the third verse was where you were bringing it...but the first two verses didn't do much for me. your writing used to be the strongest part of your armor, queen. your ability to ride a groove majestically was a vital second. since WU, that's been inverted. you're flowing, but the pen game is less lethal.

is this a variation of the 'don't go talking that shit, badu' that you freaked on 'on & on', like you don't want to bring it on the level of the third verse through the whole song b/c you don't want to lose people?

hmmm.

edit: the world needs a jay electronica album as soon as possible. just thought i'd throw that out there.

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