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Shakeet Lokh Em
Member since Mar 22nd 2005
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Tue Nov-07-23 03:55 PM

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"I miss this place"


  

          

Shout out to the old timers who come back to the Boards every now and again just to lurk.

But this is the Freestyle Board right? So I guess I have to contribute something or else this is just me reminiscing LOL.

One of my favorite forms of composition is the Kwansaba. 7 lines, with 7 words, each word no more than 7 letters. I used to post these years ago. Sooooooo...

*Memory Of Heaven*

With the speed of Autumn leaves falling
So goes the orbit of our lives
Smiles of our young as they flower
Lee Morgan and his trumpet of power
Those brass notes washing over our bride
As we dance with our eyes closed
The simple things are Heaven on Earth

"I'm scientific, but my reflex gangsta"- Black Thought

  

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RE: I miss this place
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ak_reborn
Member since Sep 24th 2005
1668 posts
Fri Jan-05-24 01:52 PM

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Ngl my dude thats why i come back and drop something everytime i think of writing cause this place was a spot back when, good to see your still alive and kicking..




Peep this, returning idol serving wisdom soup,
got me sifting through, archives of his lyrical,
masterpieces, I puff the sweetest,
scented memories sending me to the days of the deepest,
battles, conflicted in my growth got me sitting here in hope,
do i write some deeper quotes or resurrect ether smoke,
and so nostalgic the times are,
stuck in side a time jar, wondering where all the rhymers are.

Intoxication, my voicebox rocks the nation
Sweet affiliation, the Doe Or Die situation - Az

  

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hdub
Member since Oct 19th 2004
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Sun Apr-07-24 04:06 PM

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Good to see someone checking in on this place. Beautiful writing as always man.

✌️

  

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