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Morehouse
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Fri Oct-23-15 10:44 AM

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"carson, ben"


  

          

gifted plans,

when the first and last
term of his self-affirming

delusions of erasure,
straight-faced, bold,
lying on his kin

ends,

feeding the delicate
invisibility of the black body
with new nooses,

the media will pry open his skull,

soft-shelled,
and find his former self(s)
operating on the frontal lobe

in white coat,
riding an elephant

across the train
tracks to the promised
electorate of haves

-
we will wave goodbye,
and be grateful.

  

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written for the right moment (s)
Nov 07th 2015
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RE: carson, ben
May 20th 2016
2
DAMN!
May 23rd 2016
3

iammindful
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Sat Nov-07-15 03:38 PM

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1. "written for the right moment (s)"
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especially here:

"feeding the delicate
invisibility of the black body
with new nooses,

the media will pry open his skull,

soft-shelled,
and find his former self(s)
operating on the frontal lobe

in white coat,
riding an elephant"

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http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

  

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alyriki
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Fri May-20-16 12:03 PM

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2. "RE: carson, ben"
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snaps.

since announcing his candidacy I've had no words for that man....
thank you for giving us words

a lyrical kind
- Alyriki -

  

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ThaAnthology
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Mon May-23-16 10:55 AM

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This is expertly executed. Thank you!

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Enter the Written World of Fahim Malik Nassar

The House of Caine (available)

Melancholoy Funk (available)

Tha Anthology (Words 2001-2003) Poetry inspired by OKP and Wash, DC
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