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lola1980
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Tue Jun-09-15 10:12 AM

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""Love Supreme on a Saturday Night"-Haiku"


          

Sweet melodies drop
Our rhythm brings a high note
A lyrical dance

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

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you know what this reminds me of?
Jun 14th 2015
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iammindful
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Sun Jun-14-15 02:42 PM

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1. "you know what this reminds me of?"
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Sun Jun-14-15 02:42 PM by iammindful

  

          

that one scene in the Color Purple at the Juke Joint where Shug is singing to Miss. Celie. I don't quite know why that is, but as soon as I read it, my mind went immediately there. This is visual, although in haiku, you were still able to present a detailed poem here.

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