Hi everyone! It's been a while for me as well being here but I still get that giddy feeling when I visit this board. I'm still in awe of such wonderful masterpieces. I'm filled with joy that we are still here...pushing. This piece was written as a response of sorts to a song titled "Work Song" by Hozier. I think it's a well written song. Very emotive. However, the singer is lacking Faith. Here is my response:

Earth mutterings
Heaven and Hell
became just words
uttered under thinkless law
Deep down within a darkened womb
all bodies return
to suckle at the innards of time
To those who believe
in no Great Author
wishing to write their own finish
Trembling in their Faith of Flesh
Their wants have needs
no sweet caress or bated breath can resurrect
No embrace has ever been willing
freely given to mere agitation
of a haunting pang
But to lift these eyes again
and not be overlooked
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

is what I was most drawn to:

no sweet caress or bated breath can resurrect
No embrace has ever been willing
freely given to mere agitation
of a haunting pang
But to lift these eyes again
and not be overlooked

Solid piece of work here, although slow in the beginning, I really dug the above lines. Peace~

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Thank you for your comments.
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When One learns
to live without fear,
then One cannot be broken.

just seeing your name made claim...
not to mention if we ever met i would be in love lol
i'm just saying virtual ideas translate into infatuation sometimes
I miss you
can i possibly be this honest
I miss all my friends in here

"keep pennin till the earth birth's your rightful seed then nurture it wit more ink..."
ASIEM
"Kuun fiyah Kuun" Quran
(Be and it is)
" A writer takes his pen to write the words again that all in love is fair" Stevie Wonder




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