Printer-friendly copy Email this topic to a friend
Lobby Freestyle Board topic #93635

Subject: ""A Night at the Theatre"" Previous topic | Next topic
lola1980
Member since Aug 26th 2012
248 posts
Sat May-16-15 08:00 AM

Click to send email to this author Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy list
""A Night at the Theatre""


          

I sit next to you in a crowd of strangers waiting to be entertained
The anticipation of embracing you
Me slowly melting from the heat between my thighs that rises each time we gaze into each other's window
Leaves me impatient
I have been told
Timing is everything
I don't take this advice into consideration tonight
You see I like you and
"time and tide waits for no man"
So why should I
Now is better than any I think to take our curiosity into reality
A spontaneous greeting that leaves me wanting you more

Desta

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top


Topic Outline
Subject Author Message Date ID
will there be a part 2?
May 31st 2015
1
RE: will there be a part 2?
Jun 04th 2015
2
      Ahh, dopeness.
Jun 05th 2015
3

iammindful
Member since Apr 29th 2012
79 posts
Sun May-31-15 03:31 PM

Click to send email to this author Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy listClick to send message via AOL IM
1. "will there be a part 2?"
In response to Reply # 0


  

          

I only ask because it reads as if there will be; a sort of cliff-hanger ending. Short, sweet, recollective of popcorn love.

http://meetmsmindful.wordpress.com
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top

    
lola1980
Member since Aug 26th 2012
248 posts
Thu Jun-04-15 04:33 PM

Click to send email to this author Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy list
2. "RE: will there be a part 2?"
In response to Reply # 1


          

iammindful, thank you for your feedback and question. Although I have not posted on the board, there has been a part 2 titled " A Night at the Musuem", a part 3 titled " A Night at the Symphony" followed by many nights and days of two creative beings celebrating our friendship, love and the arts.

More love to come by DESTA

“Writing is a potion of devotion, magical, mysterious and mighty” Desta

"Love is like the sea. It's a moving thing, but still and all, it takes its shape from the shore it meets, and it's different with every shore. ”
Zora Neale Hurston

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top

        
iammindful
Member since Apr 29th 2012
79 posts
Fri Jun-05-15 09:48 PM

Click to send email to this author Click to send private message to this authorClick to view this author's profileClick to add this author to your buddy listClick to send message via AOL IM
3. "Ahh, dopeness. "
In response to Reply # 2


  

          

I'm a fan of serial poems; good to know you've taken it further.

http://meetmsmindful.wordpress.com
http://www.lulu.com/content/132318

  

Printer-friendly copy | Reply | Reply with quote | Top

Lobby Freestyle Board topic #93635 Previous topic | Next topic
Powered by DCForum+ Version 1.25
Copyright © DCScripts.com